记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra prabhavit bhasa prayog garnu parcha. Tapai le 'weak mind' bhanera bhannu bhayo tara yo thap spashta garna parcha. Arko kura, tapai ko uttar adhik lamo ra thulo sentence haru le bharieko cha, jasle gardaa prabhav kam hunchha. Tapai le 3-4 sentence bhitra spashta ra prabhavit uttar dinu parcha.

範例: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I tend to forget details easily. Therefore, I rely on my phone to keep records and set reminders to help me remember important information.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta tatha sampurna vaakya prayog garnu parcha. Tapai le 'I also forget and it' bhanera adhura vaakya prayog garnu bhayo, jasle uttar adhuro ra asamarthak dekhaunchha. Tapai le linking words jastai 'however' ya 'but' prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau.

範例: I have never forgotten anything very important, but once I forgot my friend's birthday. Usually, I write notes or set reminders on my phone to avoid this, but that time I simply overlooked it.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma thap sangathit tatha spashta bhasa prayog garnu parcha. Tapai le 'everything' bhanera general kura garnu bhayo, jasle uttar lai asamarthak banaunchha. Tapai le specific kura haru jastai 'appointments', 'tasks', 'meetings' jasta udaharan dinu parcha ra linking words prayog garnu parcha.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks such as appointments, meetings, and when to go out. Although it is difficult to remember everything, I follow a daily routine which helps me stay organized.

建議: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra prabhavit bhasa prayog garnu parcha. Tapai le 'quick mind with weak memory' bhanera thap spashta garna parcha. Arko kura, tapai le linking words jastai 'so' ya 'therefore' prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau.

範例: I usually write notes or take photos to remember important things. Since I tend to forget easily, I rely on these methods to help me stay organized.

× I always keep record on my phones or even I notice something if.

✓ I always keep records on my phone or even notice something if.

The word 'record' should be plural 'records' because it refers to multiple instances of keeping information. Also, 'phones' should be singular 'phone' as typically one phone is used for keeping records. This correction improves noun number agreement and clarity.

× I think it is also something important, right? As I said before, I usually write notes on my phone or set reminders to help me remember important information, but that time I also forget and it.

✓ I think it was also something important, right? As I said before, I usually write notes on my phone or set reminders to help me remember important information, but that time I also forgot it.

The event happened in the past, so 'is' should be 'was' to match past tense. Also, 'forget' should be 'forgot' to correctly use past tense. The phrase 'and it' is incomplete and should be removed or completed; here it is removed for clarity.

× when to go out, home to meet.

✓ when to go out, whom to meet at home.

The phrase 'home to meet' is unclear and incorrect. It should specify 'whom to meet at home' to correctly use the preposition 'at' and clarify the meaning.

× I keep some notes to remember important things or I capture it from my camera.

✓ I keep some notes to remember important things or I capture them with my camera.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it refers to plural 'important things'; 'them' is the correct plural pronoun. Also, 'from my camera' should be 'with my camera' to indicate the instrument used for capturing.