记忆— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
I think it's because I can remember the things, the memories when I was a child, the good ones and the bad ones, and I can remember the passwords and the other numbers, the long ones.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
Sometimes in my exams some of the words or the subjects just doesn't come to my mind. I forget them, but it's not much like before I say it. My memory is very good so it doesn't happens too much. I don't forget important things much I think.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
And sometimes I need to remember the subjects in school that my teachers teach me. But there are lots of things I should remember I need to remember, like the passwords and things or.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
A lot. In most of times I don't need anything to remember because my memory is good, I think. But sometimes in in the important things, very important things, I need to get notes in my phone or the paper because I trust my memory. But sometimes it's not enough.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分數: 65.0建議: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve etkili bir İngilizce kullanımı için cümlelerinizi daha açık ve doğrudan kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalı ve cevaplarınızı 5 cümleyi geçmeyecek şekilde sınırlandırmalısınız. Örneğin, anılarınızdan ve şifrelerden bahsetmek yerine, bunları daha spesifik ve bağlantılı şekilde ifade edebilirsiniz.
範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily recall important passwords and childhood memories, both good and bad. This ability helps me in daily tasks and studies. However, I sometimes need to write down very long numbers to avoid mistakes.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分數: 60.0建議: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltmeli ve daha tutarlı bir yapı kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizin akıcılığını artırabilirsiniz. Detayları daha spesifik vererek cevabınızı güçlendirebilirsiniz.
範例: Sometimes during exams, I forget certain words or topics, but this happens less often now because my memory has improved. Generally, I don't forget important things, but occasionally I might need to review notes to be sure.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分數: 55.0建議: Cevabınızda gereksiz tekrarlar ve eksik cümle yapıları var. Daha net ve doğrudan cevaplar vermeli, ayrıca bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlamalısınız. Spesifik örnekler vererek içeriği zenginleştirebilirsiniz.
範例: In my daily life, I need to remember various things such as school subjects taught by my teachers and important passwords. Additionally, I try to keep track of appointments and tasks to stay organized.
How do you remember important things?
分數: 65.0建議: Cevabınızda daha akıcı ve mantıklı bir yapı kurmalısınız. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayabilir ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, yöntemlerinizi daha spesifik örneklerle açıklayabilirsiniz.
範例: Usually, I rely on my good memory to remember important things. However, for very important matters, I write notes on my phone or paper to ensure I don't forget. This method helps me stay organized and reduces stress.
文法
× Sometimes in my exams some of the words or the subjects just doesn't come to my mind.
✓ Sometimes in my exams some of the words or the subjects just don't come to my mind.
The subject 'some of the words or the subjects' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't' to agree in number.
× My memory is very good so it doesn't happens too much.
✓ My memory is very good so it doesn't happen too much.
The verb 'happens' should be in base form 'happen' after 'doesn't' because 'doesn't' is an auxiliary verb and requires the base form of the main verb.
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