记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两个具体原因支持。

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to focus only on what is in front of me, so if I try to remember other things, I often forget them.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇和表达不清楚的问题，建议用简洁的句子描述具体事件，并避免重复。

範例: Yes, last weekend I forgot my liquid makeup and eye shadow in the classroom, and I only realized it later.

建議: 回答有些不连贯，建议先给出主题句，然后用具体细节支持，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important academic work, such as the main ideas and core values in the papers I read.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议先明确回答问题，然后用具体方法或技巧支持，注意语法和逻辑连贯。

範例: I usually remember important things by paying close attention at first and focusing on the most impressive details, which helps me recall them later.

× Actually, no, because I'd like to focus on the things in front of me and if I turn to to do the other things, I will totally forget it.

✓ Actually, no, because I'd like to focus on the things in front of me and if I turn to doing the other things, I will totally forget it.

The phrase 'turn to' should be followed by a verb in the -ing form to indicate starting an activity. Here, 'turn to doing' is correct, not 'turn to to do'.

× Yep, last weekend I just forgot my my makeup, liquid makeup, eye shadow in the classroom and I just forgot I forgot.

✓ Yep, last weekend I just forgot my makeup, liquid makeup, eye shadow in the classroom and I just forgot.

The repetition 'I just forgot I forgot' is redundant and incorrect. The past tense 'forgot' is used correctly once; repeating it is unnecessary and confusing.

× The importance, the most important thing I need to remember in my daily life is all about my academic work. Like the papers, the core values, the key idea in the papers.

✓ The most important thing I need to remember in my daily life is all about my academic work, like the papers, the core values, and the key ideas in the papers.

The phrase 'The importance' is unnecessary and awkward here. Also, 'key idea' should be plural 'key ideas' to match 'papers' and 'core values'. Adding 'and' before the last item improves the list structure.

× I think the most important thing is in our mind, especially at first glance. I will do remember all the things. The most impressive part for me, so it not depends on.

✓ I think the most important thing is in our mind, especially at first glance. I will remember all the things. The most impressive part for me, so it does not depend on anything.

The phrase 'I will do remember' is incorrect; 'do' is unnecessary here. The last sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'does not depend on anything' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.