记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态不一致（"considered" 应为 "consider"），以及表达不够自然。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态一致性。

範例: Actually, I don't think I'm very good at memorising things. I often forget where I put my keys or phone, and sometimes I miss meetings or seminars, so I usually set alarms to remind myself.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇（"she she"），表达不够流畅，且"make it off"用法不当。建议避免重复，使用更准确的短语表达歉意。

範例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend Lucy's birthday. She was really upset, but I promised to make it up to her by giving some presents.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误（"was" 应为 "are"），表达不够具体，且使用了模糊词汇"and so on"。建议使用正确时态，提供更具体的细节，避免模糊表达。

範例: It varies, but mostly I need to remember deadlines, meeting times, and taking my medicine every day.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇（"in the in the"），句子结构不完整（"or just. Set an alarm"），表达不够连贯。建议注意句子完整性和连贯性，避免重复。

範例: I rely heavily on technology devices like my smartphone. Additionally, I write things down in the To-Do List apps or set alarms to remind me.

× In fact, I considered I'm not really good at it.

✓ In fact, I consider I'm not really good at it.

这里使用了过去时态considered，但句意表达的是现在的情况，应使用一般现在时consider。

× sometimes I forgot the meetings or seminars, so I need to set an alarm to remind me.

✓ sometimes I forget the meetings or seminars, so I need to set an alarm to remind me.

句子中描述的是经常发生的事情，应该用一般现在时forget，而不是过去时forgot。

× Oh yes, actually I had forgotten my best friend Lucy's birthday.

✓ Oh yes, actually I forgot my best friend Lucy's birthday.

这里描述过去发生的事情，使用一般过去时forgot即可，过去完成时had forgotten不合适。

× She she was really upset about that, but I promised to make it off by some presents.

✓ She was really upset about that, but I promised to make it up with some presents.

重复了“she”，应删除多余的词；短语“make it off”错误，正确表达是“make it up”，表示弥补。

× For most of the thing I need to remember was the deadline and the meeting time and the other things such as the medicine I need to eat every day and so on.

✓ For most of the things I need to remember are the deadlines and the meeting times and other things such as the medicine I need to take every day and so on.

“thing”应为复数“things”，且“deadline”和“meeting time”应为复数形式“deadlines”和“meeting times”，动词也应与复数主语一致。

× For most of the thing I need to remember was the deadline and the meeting time and the other things such as the medicine I need to eat every day and so on.

✓ For most of the things I need to remember are the deadlines and the meeting times and other things such as the medicine I need to take every day and so on.

主语为复数，谓语动词应使用现在时复数形式“are”，而不是过去时“was”。

× I rely heavily on the technology devices such as my smartphone.

✓ I rely heavily on technological devices such as my smartphone.

“technology devices”搭配不当，应使用形容词“technological”修饰“devices”。

× Additionally, I used to write down the things in the in the To Do List on the apps or just. Set an alarm to remind me.

✓ Additionally, I usually write down things in the To Do List on apps or just set an alarm to remind me.

“used to”表示过去习惯，句意应表达现在习惯，故改为一般现在时“usually write”。另外，句子中“in the in the”重复，应删除多余部分。