记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. For example, use 'I often forget' instead of 'I often forgot'. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas; instead, focus on one or two clear points. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I wouldn't consider myself good at memorising things because I often forget where I have placed my keys or phone. Therefore, I rely on notes and reminders to help me keep track of important items.

建議: Be careful with word choice and clarity. For example, 'promote pro promise' is unclear and seems like a mistake. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas logically. Also, try to be more specific about how you made it up to your friend.

範例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which made me feel terrible because we are very close. So, I apologised sincerely and took them out for dinner to make it up to them.

建議: Good answer with relevant content. To improve, use linking words to connect ideas and add a bit more detail or examples to enrich your response.

範例: I need to remember social and family commitments, such as birthdays, because it's important to maintain strong relationships. For example, I often check in with friends and try to balance my time between work and personal life.

建議: Be careful with word choice and pronunciation. For example, 'airlines' and 'cylinders' seem incorrect in this context. Use correct vocabulary like 'alerts' or 'alarms' and 'calendars' or 'apps'. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes such as 'my smartphones is' should be 'my smartphone is'.

範例: I rely heavily on technology to remember important things. My smartphone is indispensable; I set reminders and alarms for tasks, and I use calendar apps to keep track of important dates and deadlines.

× I often forgot where I have placed my keys or phone, and I struggle with remembering names and faces.

✓ I often forget where I have placed my keys or phone, and I struggle with remembering names and faces.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used instead.

× My smartphones is indispensable, I set reminders and airlines for tasks, and I use apps like cylinders to keep track of important dates and deadlines.

✓ My smartphone is indispensable, I set reminders and alarms for tasks, and I use apps like calendars to keep track of important dates and deadlines.

The word 'smartphones' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular, so it should be singular 'smartphone' to match the verb. Also, 'airlines' and 'cylinders' are incorrect words in this context; the correct words are 'alarms' and 'calendars' respectively.