记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang natural dan ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan jelas. Hindari kalimat yang terlalu panjang dan tidak terstruktur dengan baik.

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I prefer subjects like science and history because they rely more on understanding and logic rather than just memorising facts.

建議: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk memberikan contoh yang spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung agar jawaban lebih koheren.

範例: Yes, I often forget important things. For example, sometimes I leave home and can't remember if I locked the door. Therefore, I always make a list of things I need to do each day.

建議: Jawaban Anda tidak lengkap dan tidak jelas. Berikan jawaban yang langsung dan lengkap dengan contoh spesifik. Gunakan kalimat yang terstruktur dengan baik.

範例: The most important thing I need to remember daily is my schedule. For example, on Monday, I have to remember to attend my online class in the morning.

建議: Jawaban Anda cukup baik tapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang kurang jelas. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas untuk menjelaskan metode Anda.

範例: I usually make a to-do list every night before bed. This helps me remember important tasks for the next day so I don't forget anything.

× That's why when I was in high school I choose scientific and historic class because in scientific we a lot depend on our logical than memories.

✓ That's why when I was in high school I chose scientific and historic classes because in science we depend a lot on logic rather than memory.

The verb 'choose' should be in the past tense 'chose' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was in high school'. Also, 'scientific and historic class' should be plural 'classes' to refer to more than one class. 'Scientific' should be 'science' to correctly name the subject. 'We a lot depend on our logical than memories' is corrected to 'we depend a lot on logic rather than memory' for proper word order and word choice.

× I think I forgot things a lot, for example, when I left home I often find myself forgot if I don't lock my door or not.

✓ I think I forget things a lot, for example, when I leave home I often find myself forgetting if I locked my door or not.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'I forgot' should be 'I forget' to express a habitual action. 'When I left home' should be 'when I leave home' to match the habitual present. 'Find myself forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'find myself forgetting' to use the correct verb form after 'find myself'. 'If I don't lock my door or not' should be 'if I locked my door or not' to refer to the past action of locking the door.

× That's why I always make totally what I have to do today.

✓ That's why I always make sure of what I have to do today.

The phrase 'make totally' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'make sure of' to indicate confirming or ensuring something. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually organize it with two two leaves because every night I spare my time before bed to make A to do list for tomorrow so I don't miss anything important that I have to do the next day, and the next day I just write.

✓ I usually organize it with two to-do lists because every night I spare time before bed to make a to-do list for tomorrow so I don't miss anything important that I have to do the next day, and the next day I just write.

The phrase 'with two two leaves' is unclear and likely a mishearing or mistranslation. It is corrected to 'with two to-do lists' to make sense in context. 'Spare my time' is better as 'spare time' without 'my'. 'Make A to do list' should be 'make a to-do list' with correct article and hyphenation.