记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say "Yes, I have a good memory and can easily remember important things."

範例: Yes, I have a good memory and can easily remember important things. For instance, I rarely forget appointments or deadlines because I pay close attention to details.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Also, avoid repeating the same idea multiple times.

範例: No, I have never forgotten anything important. I usually make lists and set reminders to ensure I don't miss important tasks or events.

建議: Your answer is brief and has grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence and add specific details using linking words to improve coherence.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks like meetings and errands. Therefore, I usually make notes on my mobile phone to keep track of these activities.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to connect your thoughts logically.

範例: To remember important things, I make notes and set reminders on my phone. Additionally, I repeat the tasks to myself several times to ensure I don't forget them.

× Yes, I am very good memorizing to the things I do not forget, which I have done in my life.

✓ Yes, I am very good at memorizing things so that I do not forget them, which I have done in my life.

The phrase 'good memorizing to the things' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'good at memorizing things'. Also, 'to' is unnecessary here and 'things' should not have 'the' before it in this context. The sentence is corrected to use the proper preposition and remove unnecessary words.

× Yes, I am very good memorizing to the things I do not forget, which I have done in my life.

✓ Yes, I am very good at memorizing things so that I do not forget them, which I have done in my life.

The preposition 'to' after 'memorizing' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'at' when expressing skill or ability, as in 'good at memorizing'.

× Yes, I am very good memorizing to the things I do not forget, which I have done in my life.

✓ Yes, I am very good at memorizing things so that I do not forget them, which I have done in my life.

The pronoun 'the things' is awkward here; 'things' without 'the' is more natural. Also, 'them' is added to refer back to 'things' to avoid ambiguity.

× No, I do not forget anything in my life which was important.

✓ No, I have not forgotten anything important in my life.

The sentence refers to past experiences, so the present perfect tense 'have not forgotten' is appropriate instead of simple present 'do not forget'. Also, 'which was important' is better expressed as 'important' directly modifying 'anything'.

× So I always remember important things which I have to do in future.

✓ So I always remember important things that I have to do in the future.

The phrase 'in future' should be 'in the future' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in defining clauses.

× So I think it will not happen in my life.

✓ So I think it will not happen in my life.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the future tense context; no correction needed.

× I usually make a note for my mobile phone to remember thing which I have to done in the daily routine.

✓ I usually make notes on my mobile phone to remember things I have to do in my daily routine.

'A note' should be plural 'notes' if referring to multiple reminders. 'Thing' should be plural 'things'. 'Have to done' is incorrect; it should be 'have to do'. Also, 'for my mobile phone' is better expressed as 'on my mobile phone'.

× I usually make a note for my mobile phone to remember thing which I have to done in the daily routine.

✓ I usually make notes on my mobile phone to remember things I have to do in my daily routine.

'Have to done' is incorrect; the correct form is 'have to do' because 'have to' is followed by the base form of the verb.

× I usually make a note for my mobile phone to remember thing which I have to done in the daily routine.

✓ I usually make notes on my mobile phone to remember things I have to do in my daily routine.

'Make a note for my mobile phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to making notes using a device.

× I always try to make notes and for important things and sometimes I give up.

✓ I always try to make notes for important things, but sometimes I give up.

The phrase 'make notes and for important things' is incorrect. It should be 'make notes for important things'. Also, 'and sometimes I give up' is better connected with 'but' to show contrast.

× I think more of I try to remember more of think.

✓ I think the more I try to remember, the more I think about it.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses a comparative structure 'the more... the more...' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I remind me again and again to do for about something important.

✓ I remind myself again and again to do something important.

'I remind me' is incorrect; the reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used. Also, 'to do for about something important' is awkward and corrected to 'to do something important'.