记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“remembered it as a phone number”应为“remember phone numbers”，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确时态和表达方式，使回答更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember phone numbers and important tasks without writing them down. My friends and family often tell me that I have a good memory.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“endless to say”应为“not to mention”，且句子结构不完整。建议使用更准确的表达，并且注意句子连贯性。

範例: Actually, I rarely forget important things, not to mention that I usually make notes or set reminders on my phone. I also double-check my reminders to make sure I don't miss anything.

建議: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够准确，如“offset meeting”可能是“offline meeting”，且“important dating”应为“important dates”。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并简化句子结构。

範例: I need to remember many things in my daily life. As a graduate student, I have to keep track of deadlines for my papers and assignments, as well as online and offline meetings. Besides that, I also remember important dates to meet my friends.

建議: 回答中存在多处语法和词汇错误，如“share you”应为“share with you”，“makes you a planet”表达不清，“keeping dairy”应为“keeping a diary”。建议使用正确的表达方式，并注意句子逻辑和连贯性。

範例: I consider myself good at managing time. For example, I use a useful app called Motion to organize my tasks and plan my life. Additionally, I have a habit of keeping a diary, which helps me remember important things.

× I would say so 'cause I often remembered it as a phone number and the important tasks without needing remember, and my friends and parents often says that I was good at memories and things.

✓ I would say so 'cause I often remember it as a phone number and the important tasks without needing to remember, and my friends and parents often say that I am good at memory and things.

这里的时间状语是一般现在时，表示经常发生的事情，所以动词应使用一般现在时。'remembered'应改为'remember'，'says'应改为'say'，'was'应改为'am'，'memories'应改为'memory'。此外，'needing remember'缺少不定式to，应改为'needing to remember'。

× my friends and parents often says that I was good at memories and things.

✓ my friends and parents often say that I am good at memory and things.

主语是复数（friends and parents），谓语动词应使用原形'say'，而不是第三人称单数'says'。

× my friends and parents often says that I was good at memories and things.

✓ my friends and parents often say that I am good at memory and things.

'memories'是复数名词，表示具体的记忆，而这里应使用不可数名词'memory'，表示记忆能力。

× Actually I rarely forget things, endless to say the important things because they usually make notes or set reminders on my phone and I always check it twice more than once.

✓ Actually I rarely forget things, not to mention the important things because they usually make notes or set reminders on my phone and I always check them twice rather than once.

'endless to say'应为固定表达'not to mention'，表示“更不用说”。此外，'check it twice more than once'表达不准确，应改为'check them twice rather than once'。

× Actually I rarely forget things, endless to say the important things because they usually make notes or set reminders on my phone and I always check it twice more than once.

✓ Actually I rarely forget things, not to mention the important things because they usually make notes or set reminders on my phone and I always check them twice rather than once.

'notes or reminders'是复数，指代时应使用复数代词'them'，而不是单数代词'it'。

× I always have to remember the deadline of my paper and assignments and some online meeting and the offset meeting.

✓ I always have to remember the deadlines of my papers and assignments and some online meetings and the offset meeting.

'deadline'应使用复数'deadlines'，'paper'应为复数'papers'，'meeting'应为复数'meetings'。此外，'deadline of'通常用'deadline for'更合适。

× I always have to remember the deadline of my paper and assignments and some online meeting and the offset meeting.

✓ I always have to remember the deadlines of my papers and assignments and some online meetings and the offset meeting.

'deadline'、'paper'和'meeting'应使用复数形式以匹配上下文中的多个任务和会议。

× And besides that, I always have to remember some important dating with my friends.

✓ And besides that, I always have to remember some important dates with my friends.

'dating'是动名词，表示约会行为，这里应使用名词'dates'表示约会的具体时间。

× I will share you a really useful app called Motion.

✓ I will share with you a really useful app called Motion.

动词'share'后面需要介词'with'来引出分享的对象。

× You can set a lot of important things in that and it can makes you a planet, your life and exercise that.

✓ You can set a lot of important things in that and it can make you a planner for your life and exercise.

助动词'can'后动词应为原形，'makes'应改为'make'。此外，'planet'应为'planner'，'exercise that'表达不清，改为'exercise'。

× I always have a habit of keeping dairy, which is really a good way to remember important things.

✓ I always have a habit of keeping a diary, which is really a good way to remember important things.

'dairy'是乳制品，应为'diary'表示日记。

× You can set a lot of important things in that and it can makes you a planet, your life and exercise that.

✓ You can set a lot of important things in that and it can make you a planner for your life and exercise.

'set ... in'不合适，通常用'set ... on'或'set ... in'取决于具体语境，这里可保留'in'，但'planet'应为'planner'，'exercise that'表达不清，建议改为'exercise'。