记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确时态和语法，避免重复和冗余。可以先直接回答问题，再补充具体细节。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, when I was in primary school, my teacher said I could remember about 100 English words each day. Also, I can recall many details when I read a book for the first time.

建議: 回答不够清晰，语法错误影响理解。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并提供具体例子或原因。

範例: I usually don't forget important things, even when I am busy. However, sometimes I might forget small tasks if I have too many things to do.

建議: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构混乱，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意句子语法。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember various tasks such as work tests, study assignments, housework, finishing my homework, exercising, and visiting my friend's house.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明记忆方法，并使用连接词使表达连贯。

範例: I usually write important things on paper or notes on my phone. Also, I review these notes several times and set reminders on my phone to help me remember.

× Yeah, so I in a primary school, my teacher says, said I can remembering about 100 English words each day.

✓ Yeah, so when I was in primary school, my teacher said I could remember about 100 English words each day.

句子中时态混乱，应该用过去时态描述过去的情况。'I in a primary school'缺少动词，需改为'when I was in primary school'。'says, said'重复且时态不一致，应使用过去时'said'。'can remembering'错误，应该用情态动词加动词原形，改为'could remember'。

× So I think my memory thinks it's good at and when I read the books first time, I can remember a lot of things in books.

✓ So I think my memory is good, and when I read books for the first time, I can remember a lot of things in them.

'memory thinks it's good at'表达不正确，应该说'memory is good'。'read the books first time'缺少介词，正确表达是'read books for the first time'。'in books'指代不明确，改为'in them'更自然。

× Not usually when I have some other things to do.

✓ Not usually, when I have other things to do.

句子缺少主语和谓语，导致结构不完整。加逗号分隔，使句子更通顺。

× Maybe I've got something important, but I not usually forgot something.

✓ Maybe I've got something important, but I don't usually forget things.

'I not usually forgot'时态和语法错误，否定形式应为'don't usually forget'，且用一般现在时表示习惯。

× I think I need to remember what do I need to do every day like the work test or study task or housework and finish my homework, do some exercise or have some things like I need to go to my friend's house.

✓ I think I need to remember what I need to do every day, like work tests, study tasks, housework, finishing my homework, doing some exercise, or things like going to my friend's house.

'what do I need to do'在宾语从句中语序错误，应为'what I need to do'。列举事项时缺少逗号，且动词形式不统一，需统一为名词或动名词形式。

× Maybe you write the important things on the paper or I read the remember things, important things a lot of times and all have a clock on my phone and.

✓ Maybe you write important things on paper, or I read important things many times, and I always have a clock on my phone.

'the remember things'表达错误，应为'important things'。句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整。'all have a clock on my phone and'不完整，改为'I always have a clock on my phone'。