记忆— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
Yes, I have a memorandum since it is my instrumental music competition. I won the competition and my family and close friends or go to my home celebrate it.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
To be honest, I usually forget some things, such as if I want to do something after 2 minutes I maybe forget it. So I think I should improve this.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
In my view, I think practical instrumental music is my everyday should do it because I'm a psychology student at university, major classes instrument, so I need practice every day.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
If I have a important things, I will write it in a card because it can make me remember it and don't let me forget.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议用简洁明了的句子直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。
範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I memorised all the pieces for my recent instrumental music competition, which helped me win. After that, my family and close friends came to my home to celebrate with me.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答较为自然，但表达有些重复且不够具体。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并举具体例子说明忘记的重要事情。
範例: To be honest, I sometimes forget important things, especially if I plan to do something after a short time. For instance, I once forgot to submit an assignment because I delayed it for a few minutes.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答结构不清晰，语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议先直接回答问题，再用具体细节支持，并使用连接词。
範例: In my daily life, I need to remember to practice my instrument regularly. Since I am a psychology student who majors in music, daily practice is essential for improving my skills.
How do you remember important things?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答较为自然，但语法和用词有误。建议使用更准确的表达，并补充更多细节说明方法的有效性。
範例: When I have important things to remember, I write them on a card or in a notebook. This method helps me keep track of tasks and prevents me from forgetting them.
文法
× I have a memorandum since it is my instrumental music competition.
✓ I have a memorandum since it is my instrumental music competition.
此句中'memorandum'用法正确，无复数错误。无需修改。
× my family and close friends or go to my home celebrate it.
✓ my family and close friends go to my home to celebrate it.
原句中'or'用错，应为连接并列主语的'and'，且缺少不定式'to'，使句子完整。
× I maybe forget it.
✓ I may forget it.
'maybe'是副词，表示“也许”，而此处应使用情态动词'may'表示可能性。
× If I have a important things, I will write it in a card because it can make me remember it and don't let me forget.
✓ If I have important things, I will write them on a card because it can help me remember and not forget.
'a important things'中'a'与复数'nouns'不匹配，应去掉'a'；'things'为复数，代词应用'them'；'in a card'应为'on a card'；'don't let me forget'表达不自然，改为'help me remember and not forget'更合适。
× If I have a important things, I will write it in a card because it can make me remember it and don't let me forget.
✓ If I have important things, I will write them on a card because it can help me remember and not forget.
'a important'中形容词前冠词使用错误，'important'前不应有冠词'a'，应直接用'adjective + noun'结构。
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