记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复。

範例: I would say I'm good at memorising things, especially people's faces and phone numbers. However, I find it harder to remember texts or historical facts.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“in short, I won't remember I”不合逻辑。建议理清句子结构，使用连贯的表达，并注意时态和代词的正确使用。

範例: Yes, once I forgot my best friend's birthday. It was very awkward and I felt guilty because she always remembered mine and was the first to wish me. That year, I completely forgot, so I apologized sincerely.

建議: 回答较为清晰，但部分表达不够自然，如“meeting a deadline of 1 project”应改为“meeting a project deadline”。建议使用更地道的表达，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my work responsibilities, such as attending scheduled meetings and meeting project deadlines. Also, I have to reply to emails and messages promptly to stay organized.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“remembers to reminders”不正确，且最后一句不完整。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并完整表达思想。

範例: I rely heavily on technology, especially my cellphone. I use apps like calendars and to-do lists to keep track of important dates and deadlines. I also set alarms and reminders to help me remember important tasks.

× I would say I'm good at memory things.

✓ I would say I'm good at memorising things.

这里'memory things'的表达不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作。'memory'是名词，不能直接修饰'things'。

× I have a particularly good memory towards people's face numbers, but I'm not good at memory content of text or historical events.

✓ I have a particularly good memory for people's faces and numbers, but I'm not good at remembering the content of texts or historical events.

'memory towards'用法不正确，应该用'memory for'表示对某事物的记忆。'face numbers'表达不清，应分开为'faces and numbers'。'memory content'也不合适，应该用动名词'remembering'。

× Yes, once I forgot my best friend's birthday.

✓ Yes, once I forgot my best friend's birthday.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× It was so awkward and I felt guilty because every year she would remember my birthday and would be the first person to say happy birthday to me.

✓ It was so awkward and I felt guilty because every year she would remember my birthday and be the first person to say happy birthday to me.

'would be'中第二个'would'多余，简化为'be'更自然。

× But that year I forgot completely so I apologize profusely and in short, I won't remember I.

✓ But that year I forgot completely, so I apologized profusely and, in short, I won't forget it again.

'I apologize'时态应与过去事件一致，改为'apologized'。'I won't remember I'结构错误，应为'I won't forget it'。

× I need to remember my work responsibilities in my daily life like attending a scheduled meeting or meeting a deadline of 1 project.

✓ I need to remember my work responsibilities in my daily life, like attending scheduled meetings or meeting the deadline of a project.

'a scheduled meeting'改为复数'meetings'更符合日常表达。'deadline of 1 project'应为'the deadline of a project'。

× Also I need to reply emails or messages promptly to stay on top of things.

✓ Also, I need to reply to emails or messages promptly to stay on top of things.

'reply'后面需要加介词'to'，表示回复某人或某物。

× I rely heavily on technologies.

✓ I rely heavily on technology.

'technology'作为不可数名词，不能用复数形式'technologies'。

× My cellphone is indispensable.

✓ My cellphone is indispensable.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× I usually use apps like calendars or to do lists to remember important dates or deadlines, and I set alarms and remembers to reminders to remember important tasks.

✓ I usually use apps like calendars or to-do lists to remember important dates or deadlines, and I set alarms and reminders to remember important tasks.

'remembers to reminders'结构错误，应为'set alarms and reminders'。'to do lists'应为'to-do lists'。

× And I often use the virtual.

✓ And I often use virtual assistants.

'the virtual'结构不完整，缺少名词，应该补充完整，如'virtual assistants'。