记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“very do well”应为“do very well”，“memorizing the scenes”表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意语法和词汇的准确性。

範例: Yes, I do very well in memorizing things, especially during my busy college schedule. For example, I can clearly remember many assignment deadlines, project deadlines, important classmates' names, and significant dates. Overall, I believe I have a good memory.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“once once a time”，“other task”应为“other tasks”。建议避免重复，使用连贯的句子，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I once forgot an important assignment deadline because I was too busy with other tasks. When the deadline approached, I had to burn the midnight oil to finish it on time. Fortunately, I managed to complete it, and I learned to be more organized in such situations.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，如“require to memories”应为“need to remember”，“some key classmates names or whose birthday”表达不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和清晰的句子结构。

範例: Well, I need to remember many things in my daily life. For example, important dates, key classmates' names and their birthdays, and most importantly, group project and assignment deadlines.

建議: 回答中表达不够自然，且有语法错误，如“some exam state”应为“exam dates”，“deadline group projects”应为“group project deadlines”。建议使用更准确的词汇和更自然的表达。

範例: For less important or urgent matters, I usually type them on WeChat so I can check anytime on my phone. However, for important things like exam dates or group project deadlines, I use my calendar app to keep track.

× I very do well in memorizing the scenes, especially during my busy college schedules.

✓ I do very well in memorizing scenes, especially during my busy college schedule.

句中 'very do well' 语序错误，应为 'do very well'。此外，'schedules' 应为单数 'schedule'，因为指的是整体的时间安排。

× I just can clearly remember lots of assignment deadline or some project deadline and some importance, uh, classmates names or some important dates.

✓ I can clearly remember lots of assignment deadlines, some project deadlines, some important classmates' names, and some important dates.

'deadline' 应为复数 'deadlines'，因为有多个截止日期。'importance' 用词错误，应为 'important'。'classmates names' 应为所有格 'classmates' names'。

× So overall I think I'm good at memory.

✓ So overall, I think I have a good memory.

'good at memory' 结构不正确，应使用 'have a good memory'。

× Well, yes, I still remember once once a time I forgot an important assignment deadline because I was too busy with other task.

✓ Well, yes, I still remember one time I forgot an important assignment deadline because I was too busy with other tasks.

'once once a time' 重复且表达不准确，应为 'one time'。'task' 应为复数 'tasks'。

× You know, when the when the deadline approached, I had to burn my midnight oil to finish it on time.

✓ You know, when the deadline approached, I had to burn the midnight oil to finish it on time.

'burn midnight oil' 是固定短语，前面应加定冠词 'the'。

× Well, fortunately I just managed to complete to complete it, but I learned to be more organized towards such situation.

✓ Well, fortunately, I just managed to complete it, but I learned to be more organized in such situations.

'complete to complete it' 重复，应去掉多余部分。'towards such situation' 用法不当，应为 'in such situations'。

× Well let me think, there are lots of things I require to memories in my daily life.

✓ Well, let me think, there are lots of things I need to remember in my daily life.

'require to memories' 结构错误，应为 'need to remember'。

× For example like some important dates, some key classmates names or whose birthday and also most important is some group and assignments deadline which is also very important.

✓ For example, some important dates, some key classmates' names or their birthdays, and also most importantly, some group assignment deadlines which are very important.

'classmates names' 应为所有格 'classmates' names'。'whose birthday' 用法不当，应为 'their birthdays'。'assignments deadline' 应为复数 'assignment deadlines'，且谓语应与复数主语一致。

× Well I think for some not very important or emergencies I just checked it or typed it on my WeChat and anytime I can check it on my cell phone.

✓ Well, I think for some not very important matters or emergencies, I just check or type it on my WeChat and can check it anytime on my cell phone.

'checked' 时态不对，应为一般现在时 'check'。'anytime I can check it' 语序不当，应为 'can check it anytime'。

× But for some important things like some exam state or some deadline group projects I would use my calendar app.

✓ But for some important things like exam dates or group project deadlines, I use my calendar app.

'exam state' 应为 'exam dates'。'deadline group projects' 词序错误，应为 'group project deadlines'。'would use' 改为一般现在时 'use' 更符合习惯表达。