记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和用词需注意准确性，例如“forgot”应为“forget”。句子结构稍显冗长，建议简洁表达，避免重复。可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, if it rains, I often forget to bring my umbrella and end up getting wet.

建議: 回答内容具体，但语法错误影响表达，如“fall asleep when I wake up”不合逻辑。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，注意时态一致。

範例: Yes, last year I forgot to set my alarm clock, so I missed my flight. I fell asleep without setting it and woke up too late, which shocked me a lot.

建議: 回答中多次出现语法错误，如“forgot”应为“forget”，“very good”应为“very well”。表达重复且不够简洁，建议用更准确的词汇和简洁句子。

範例: I need to remember my daily plans because sometimes I forget about my reservations and miss them. This is a bad habit that I want to improve.

建議: 回答表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议使用更连贯的句子和恰当的连接词。避免重复和不必要的细节。

範例: I write important things in my calendar, which reminds me 30 minutes before. Then I review the plan to make sure I don't forget it.

× Actually, I'm not a person good at memorizing things. I always forget something that is important, such as if it's raining today I will forgot to bring my umbrella when I'm going out and then being wet.

✓ Actually, I'm not a person good at memorizing things. I always forget something that is important, such as if it's raining today I will forget to bring my umbrella when I'm going out and then get wet.

这里的 'will forgot' 是过去式 'forgot'，但根据句意应使用一般将来时的动词原形 'forget'。助动词 'will' 后面应接动词原形。建议将 'will forgot' 改为 'will forget'。

× Of course, last year I forgot to set the alarm clock and then I missed the flight. That's because I forgot to set the clock at night and then fall asleep when I wake up. I was so shocked.

✓ Of course, last year I forgot to set the alarm clock and then I missed the flight. That's because I forgot to set the clock at night and then fell asleep when I woke up. I was so shocked.

这里 'fall asleep' 和 'wake up' 应该用过去式，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。应将 'fall asleep' 改为 'fell asleep'，'wake up' 改为 'woke up'。

× I need to remember if I have a plan today because sometimes I'll forgot I have a reservation later and then I'll miss the reservation.

✓ I need to remember if I have a plan today because sometimes I'll forget I have a reservation later and then I'll miss the reservation.

'I'll forgot' 中 'forgot' 是过去式，助动词 'will' 后应接动词原形，故应改为 'I'll forget'。

× I need to remember it very good.

✓ I need to remember it very well.

'good' 是形容词，修饰动词时应使用副词 'well'。这里 'remember' 是动词，需用副词修饰，故改为 'very well'。

× I will write it down in my calendar and then it will alarm me before 30 minutes and then I will say it and think, find it.

✓ I will write it down in my calendar and then it will alarm me 30 minutes before and then I will say it and think, find it.

'before 30 minutes' 的表达不正确，正确表达应为 '30 minutes before'，即时间状语应放在数字前面。

× such as if it's raining today I will forgot to bring my umbrella when I'm going out and then being wet.

✓ such as if it's raining today, I will forget to bring my umbrella when I'm going out and then get wet.

句子缺少逗号分隔条件状语，且 'being wet' 结构不完整，应改为 'get wet'，使句子结构完整通顺。