记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

範例: I'm not very good at memorising written materials like recipes or articles because they contain many unfamiliar words and complex sentences.

建議: 回答内容重复且表达不够流畅。建议使用连词连接句子，避免重复，并提供更具体的细节。

範例: Yes, I often forget whether I have taken my keys or locked the door when I go outside, which is quite common for me.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，句子较长且不够连贯。建议分句表达，使用连接词，并注意语法准确。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember meal times, carry my keys when I go out, and always bring my phone because it's essential for communication.

建議: 回答表达基本清楚，但用词和句式较简单。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并丰富细节。

範例: I usually write important tasks in my planner and ask my close friends or family to remind me, which helps me not to forget important things.

× I really don't know how to memorize writing things because I show them recipes.

✓ I really don't know how to memorize written things because I show them recipes.

这里的'memorize writing things'不符合习惯表达，应改为'memorize written things'，表示记忆写下的东西。

× Somethings like my English article or Chinese articles because I feel it's really difficult with so many different words and sentences.

✓ Some things like my English articles or Chinese articles because I feel it's really difficult with so many different words and sentences.

'Somethings'应为复数形式'some things'，表示一些东西。

× Yes, as many people did.

✓ Yes, like many people do.

这里谈论的是一般情况，应该用一般现在时'do'，而不是过去时'did'。

× I always forget if I carried my keys after I go outdoor or I forget if I close my door.

✓ I always forget if I have carried my keys after I go outdoors or if I have closed my door.

'carried'应使用现在完成时'have carried'表示动作对现在的影响；'go outdoor'应为'go outdoors'，表示去户外；'close'应使用现在完成时'have closed'。

× after I go outdoor

✓ after I go outdoors

'outdoor'是形容词，表示户外的，作为副词应使用'outdoors'。

× That's really a common thing and I always forget them.

✓ That's really a common thing and I always forget it.

'thing'是单数，指代时应使用单数代词'it'，而不是复数'them'。

× when I go go outside I must keep my key with me

✓ when I go outside I must keep my key with me

重复了'go'，应删除一个。

× I must keep my key with me

✓ I must keep my keys with me

通常人们有多把钥匙，且前文提到'keys'，应保持一致使用复数。

× and also the as a modern people I must bring my phone with me because without phone I can't do anything.

✓ and also as a modern person I must bring my phone with me because without a phone I can't do anything.

'the as a modern people'结构错误，应为'as a modern person'；'people'是复数，单数应为'person'；'without phone'前应加不定冠词'a'。

× The most effective and simple way is just write all of the important things in my memory task

✓ The most effective and simple way is just to write all of the important things in my memory task

动词不定式作表语时，需加'to'，即'to write'。

× let them remind me these important things.

✓ let them remind me of these important things.

动词'remind'后应接介词'of'，表示提醒某人某事。