记忆— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
Yes, it is really easy for me to memorize things, but one of my legs is I can't remember it for a long time. Just a few times I will forget it. It's really hard for me.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
Of course I have forgot to copy the files for three for three pages. Just copy it for one pages. It is really a cost of time and I must.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
In my daily life I need to remember the road to the school. I always try to remember it on my phone. I try to write the road down and in.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
As for me, I always use the phone. I try to write the things down on my phone in order to remind me what will happened next day. It is really good too for me.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分數: 55.0建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“one of my legs”应为“one of my weaknesses”。建议你在回答时注意语法准确性，并且表达要简洁明了。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明。
範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, but I sometimes struggle to remember information for a long time. For example, I might forget details after a few days.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分數: 45.0建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整且不连贯。建议你使用正确的时态和句子结构，清楚地描述事件的细节，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
範例: Yes, I once forgot to copy three pages of important files and only copied one page. This mistake cost me a lot of time because I had to redo the work.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答内容不够具体，表达不完整且有语法错误。建议你明确说明需要记住的内容，并且用连贯的句子描述你如何记忆。
範例: In my daily life, I need to remember the way to school. To help me, I usually save the route on my phone or write down the directions.
How do you remember important things?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“what will happened”应为“what will happen”。建议你使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式，同时可以补充更多细节说明。
範例: I usually use my phone to remember important things. I write reminders or notes so that I don't forget what I need to do the next day.
文法
× Of course I have forgot to copy the files for three for three pages.
✓ Of course I have forgotten to copy the files for three pages.
这里使用现在完成时，助动词have后面应该接动词的过去分词形式，'forgot'是过去式，正确形式是'forgotten'。
× Just copy it for one pages.
✓ Just copy it for one page.
'pages'是复数，而前面有数量词'one'，数量词'one'后面应该接单数名词，故应改为'page'。
× It is really a cost of time and I must.
✓ It really wastes time and I must be careful.
原句结构混乱，'a cost of time'表达不自然，且句尾'and I must'不完整。建议改为更自然的表达。
× I always try to remember it on my phone.
✓ I always try to remember it using my phone.
'remember it on my phone'表达不准确，应该用'using my phone'表示用手机来帮助记忆。
× I try to write the road down and in.
✓ I try to write the directions down.
'write the road down and in'结构不完整且不通顺，改为更自然的表达。
× I try to write the things down on my phone in order to remind me what will happened next day.
✓ I try to write things down on my phone in order to remind myself what will happen the next day.
'remind me'应为'remind myself'，反身代词用错；'will happened'时态错误，应为'will happen'；'next day'前应加定冠词'the'。
× what will happened next day.
✓ what will happen the next day.
'will'后应接动词原形，'happened'是过去式，错误，应改为'happen'。
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