记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ не совсем ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки, а также избыточные и неполные предложения. Рекомендуется отвечать более связно, используя полные предложения и избегая повторов. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для логичности.

範例: To be honest, I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget important items. For example, I have lost my bank card about five times, which shows my poor memory.

建議: Ответ содержит много пауз и неполных предложений, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется строить предложения более чётко и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. A couple of years ago, I lost my bag which contained my passport, and it was very stressful because I needed it for travel.

建議: Ответ повторяет идеи и содержит неполные предложения. Рекомендуется формулировать мысли чётко и избегать повторов, используя связующие слова для логичности.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember to take my keys and wallet with me. It is especially important to keep them safe so that I don't lose them.

建議: Ответ содержит много пауз и неполных предложений, что снижает его ясность. Рекомендуется использовать полные предложения и связующие слова для улучшения связности и понятности.

範例: Usually, when I need to remember something important, I keep it in my mind and think about it every day until the day comes. Additionally, I set reminders on my phone to help me.

× I don't think that they have a great memory because I always forget. Things and I always lose them, like for example.

✓ I don't think I have a great memory because I always forget things and lose them, for example.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connection between clauses. Combining the sentences and removing unnecessary pauses improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I lost my bank card about 5. Times and. And I don't think.

✓ I have lost my bank card about five times, and I don't think I am very careful.

The original sentence incorrectly splits the phrase and uses an incomplete sentence. Using the present perfect tense 'have lost' is appropriate for experiences up to now, and completing the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I remember one situation that happened to me, uh, a couple. Years ago I lost my my back and.

✓ Yes, I remember one situation that happened to me a couple of years ago when I lost my bag.

The sentence is fragmented and contains repetition ('my my back'). Correcting the fragment and using the past tense 'lost' properly improves clarity.

× That there was a there was my passport that was lost because it was in my bag.

✓ My passport was lost because it was in my bag.

The original sentence is repetitive and awkward. Simplifying the sentence structure removes redundancy and improves readability.

× I always need to remember to take my keys and wallet with me and especially I need to remember. To always hold it with me and not. Always need to remember to not lose it.

✓ I always need to remember to take my keys and wallet with me, and especially to always keep them with me so I don't lose them.

The phrase 'hold it with me' is incorrect; 'keep them with me' is more appropriate. Also, the sentence is fragmented and repetitive; combining and correcting prepositions improves the sentence.

× Usually when I have to remember something, I keep that in my mind. At the end and just live with the. What is this a thought every day until the day comes and.

✓ Usually, when I have to remember something, I keep it in my mind and think about it every day until the day comes.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the fragments into a coherent sentence improves understanding.

× I usually do like reminders on my phone.

✓ I usually set reminders on my phone.

The phrase 'do like reminders' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'set reminders' when referring to using phone features.