记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as "after I had my birth with my first child." Try to express your ideas more clearly and directly. Also, avoid redundancy like "even forgot to bring even my keys." Keep your sentences concise and natural. Use a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details with appropriate linking words.

範例: I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially since I had my first child. For example, I often forget to bring my keys when I come home, which is quite inconvenient.

建議: Your answer does not directly address the question about forgetting something important. Instead, you talk about memories from childhood. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and then provide specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, last week I forgot to attend an important meeting because I didn't write it down in my calendar.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and varying your vocabulary. Also, try to expand a bit more with specific examples or reasons to enrich your response.

範例: Since I have a baby, I need to remember several important things every day. For example, I have to keep track of her feeding schedule, diaper changes, and when to give her vitamins and medicines. These tasks are essential to ensure she stays healthy and happy.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to improve flow. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: I usually write down important tasks in the To-Do List or notes app on my phone. This way, if I forget something, I can easily check my phone to make sure I haven't missed anything.

× I can't say I'm not good at memorizing things, especially after I had my birth with my first child because I noticed nowadays I even forgot to bring even my keys which is very essential when I come home.

✓ I can't say I'm not good at memorizing things, especially after I gave birth to my first child because I noticed nowadays I even forget to bring my keys which are very essential when I come home.

The phrase 'I had my birth' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I gave birth'. Also, 'I even forgot' should be in present tense 'I even forget' to match 'nowadays'. Additionally, 'keys which is' should be 'keys which are' because 'keys' is plural.

× I have a lot of important memories when I was four or five years old. Back then I know I can still remember it, but right now, at my age, it seems like my memories are fading and I can't reminisce.

✓ I have a lot of important memories from when I was four or five years old. Back then I knew I could still remember them, but right now, at my age, it seems like my memories are fading and I can't reminisce.

The phrase 'I know I can still remember it' should be in past tense 'I knew I could still remember them' to match the past time frame. Also, 'memories' is plural, so 'it' should be 'them'.

× I usually write down all the important things that I need to remember on my To Do List phone or on my on the notes of my phone.

✓ I usually write down all the important things that I need to remember on my To Do List or in the notes on my phone.

The phrase 'on my To Do List phone' is incorrect; it should be 'on my To Do List'. Also, 'on my on the notes of my phone' is redundant and incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the notes on my phone'.

× This way if I forgot somethings I just have to browse my phone and check the details that I have written and ensure I haven't forgotten anything.

✓ This way if I forget something I just have to browse my phone and check the details that I have written and ensure I haven't forgotten anything.

The phrase 'if I forgot somethings' should be in present tense 'if I forget something' to express a conditional situation. Also, 'somethings' is incorrect; the correct word is 'something'.