记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，例如“to memorizing”应为“to memorize”，句子结构不完整且逻辑不够连贯。建议注意动词形式的正确使用，并且表达时要简洁明了，避免冗余。

範例: I find memorizing things quite challenging because sometimes I have trouble breathing properly, which affects my brain's oxygen supply. As a result, I struggle to remember numbers or study content effectively.

建議: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，如“once forgotten”应为“once forgot”，“I really shamed”应为“I was really ashamed”。建议加强时态和语法的准确性，同时使表达更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which was a terrible experience. She called me and asked why I didn't remember it. I felt really ashamed and bought her a big, expensive gift to make up for it.

建議: 回答中存在词汇使用不当和重复，如“makeup list”应为“to-do list”，且“how how”重复。建议使用准确的词汇表达，并注意句子简洁和逻辑连贯。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my timetable and tasks. For example, when I go to the library or a coffee shop, I make a to-do list of the tasks I plan to complete. This helps boost my confidence and gives me a sense of satisfaction.

建議: 回答表达较为口语化且有些重复，如“take down some important things”可以更简洁。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

範例: I usually write down important tasks, such as meetings, in my Apple Notes app. This method is convenient and helps me keep track of my schedule easily.

× Well, it's quite challenging for me to memorizing things.

✓ Well, it's quite challenging for me to memorize things.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式。这里应使用to memorize而不是to memorizing。

× That is because I have a so every time I can't breathe very well, my brain lack of oxygen.

✓ That is because I have asthma, so every time I can't breathe very well, my brain lacks oxygen.

句子结构不完整且缺少必要的名词，'I have a'后应接名词（如asthma），且主谓不一致，'brain lack'应为'brain lacks'。

× my brain lack of oxygen.

✓ my brain lacks oxygen.

主语是单数名词brain，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式lacks。

× So it's cause damage to my brain.

✓ So it causes damage to my brain.

缺少动词的正确形式，'cause'应为第三人称单数形式'causes'，且主语是it。

× That's the reason I'm not really at memorizing some numbers or the content in my subject.

✓ That's the reason I'm not really good at memorizing some numbers or the content in my subject.

缺少形容词good来修饰短语，表达“擅长于”的意思。

× I remembered I once forgotten my best friend's birthday so she just directly called me.

✓ I remember I once forgot my best friend's birthday, so she just directly called me.

时态错误，remember用一般现在时表示记得，forgot是forget的过去式，forgotten是过去分词，不能单独用。

× And I really shamed.

✓ And I was really ashamed.

shamed是动词过去式或形容词，表达“感到羞愧”应使用形容词ashamed，并且需要系动词was。

× And as a return I buy a really big and expensive gift for her.

✓ And as a return, I bought a really big and expensive gift for her.

时态错误，描述过去事件应使用过去时bought，且短语应为'as a return'或更自然的'as a result'。

× Well, actually I have to say it's a like a timetable in everyday task.

✓ Well, actually I have to say it's like a timetable for everyday tasks.

错误使用冠词和复数形式，'a like a timetable'重复且不正确，'everyday task'应为复数tasks。

× For example, if I go to the library or some coffee shop, I would definitely make a makeup list like how how many tasks I will tackle these days.

✓ For example, if I go to the library or some coffee shop, I would definitely make a makeup list of how many tasks I will tackle these days.

动词make后应接介词of来引出内容，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× It can boost me confident and give a sense of satisfaction.

✓ It can boost my confidence and give a sense of satisfaction.

名词confident是形容词，名词形式应为confidence。

× Well, we really, I just take down some important things, like some important tasks.

✓ Well, really, I just take down some important things, like some important tasks.

多余的代词we导致句子不通顺，应去掉。

× For example, if I have some meetings in some days, I will put it down in my Apple memorandum.

✓ For example, if I have some meetings on some days, I will put them down in my Apple memorandum.

时间表达应使用介词on，且meetings为复数，代词应为them。

× So it's quite convenient and a good way for me to check out.

✓ So it's quite convenient and a good way for me to check.

短语check out通常指结账或查看，单独使用不合适，去掉out更符合语境。