记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I couldn't say I good at it' nên là 'I wouldn't say I'm good at it'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I wouldn't say I'm very good at memorising things. However, I tend to remember things that interest me, such as a memorable movie line. On the other hand, I find it difficult to remember random numbers or historical dates.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, câu 'I use them too like Google Calendar' nên sửa thành 'I use tools like Google Calendar'. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời có tính logic cao hơn.

範例: Definitely, I used to miss my homework deadlines. However, now I use tools like Google Calendar and virtual assistants on my phone to set up my schedule, which helps me manage and control my time better.

建議: Câu trả lời cần được tổ chức rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ. Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ví dụ, 'meeting deadline or thing to do' nên là 'meeting deadlines or things to do'.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule, such as meeting deadlines and tasks I have to complete. Additionally, I try to remember what groceries to buy and when to take breaks or exercise.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'they relate on me' nên là 'they are related to me'. Ngoài ra, câu cuối bị thiếu và không hoàn chỉnh, bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời với các liên từ phù hợp.

範例: For me, important things like identification numbers, PIN codes, and passwords are easy to remember because they are related to me personally. Besides that, I usually write down important information in my notebook or set reminders on my phone, and I try to repeat them to reinforce my memory.

× I couldn't say I good at it.

✓ I couldn't say I'm good at it.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' to correctly link the subject 'I' with the adjective 'good'. The phrase 'I good at it' is incorrect because 'good' is an adjective and needs a linking verb such as 'am' to form a proper predicate.

× I tend to remember things that I'm interested in like singular movie line, but I must effort to remember a random number or date of history.

✓ I tend to remember things that I'm interested in like a single movie line, but I must make an effort to remember a random number or a date in history.

The phrase 'singular movie line' is incorrect; 'single' is the correct adjective to describe one item. Also, 'must effort' is incorrect; the verb 'make' is needed before 'an effort'. Additionally, 'date of history' should be 'a date in history' to use the correct preposition and article.

× Definitely, I used to miss my homework deadline but now I use them too like Google Calendar or virtual assistant on my phone to set up my schedule is help manage and control my time.

✓ Definitely, I used to miss my homework deadlines but now I use tools like Google Calendar or a virtual assistant on my phone to set up my schedule to help manage and control my time.

The plural form 'deadlines' is needed because homework deadlines are usually multiple. 'Use them too like' is awkward; 'use tools like' is clearer. Also, 'is help manage' is incorrect; it should be 'to help manage' to express purpose.

× In daily life I need to remember my schedule like meeting deadline or thing to do.

✓ In daily life, I need to remember my schedule like meeting deadlines or things to do.

The singular 'deadline' and 'thing' should be plural 'deadlines' and 'things' because schedules usually include multiple items. Also, a comma after 'In daily life' improves readability.

× I also try to remember what grocery to buy or when take to break or exercise.

✓ I also try to remember what groceries to buy or when to take a break or exercise.

'Grocery' should be plural 'groceries' when referring to items to buy. The phrase 'when take to break' is missing 'to' before 'take' and the article 'a' before 'break'. Correct prepositions and articles are necessary for clarity.

× For me the important thing like identification number, pin code, password are easy to remember because they relate on me.

✓ For me, important things like identification numbers, pin codes, and passwords are easy to remember because they relate to me.

'Important thing' should be plural 'important things' to match the list. 'Relate on me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'relate to me'. Also, plural forms are needed for the listed items.

× Beside I usually write down important thing in my notebook or set up on my phone and try to repeat a.

✓ Besides, I usually write down important things in my notebook or set them up on my phone and try to repeat them.

'Beside' should be 'Besides' as a transitional word. 'Important thing' should be plural 'important things'. 'Set up on my phone' needs an object, so 'set them up' is correct. The sentence ends abruptly with 'repeat a', which should be 'repeat them' to refer to the important things.