记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "in the in textbooks" and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, when I was in high school, I could easily remember the content of textbooks, which helped me achieve high grades in history.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "headache schedule". Try to use correct tenses and clearer expressions. Also, avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to explain reasons logically.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once missed a dentist appointment because I was feeling unwell and distracted. Therefore, I tend to be less attentive to such tasks when I'm not feeling well.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating words like "my phone" and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, try to be more specific about the consequences of forgetting your password.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my phone and its password because I have to enter it every time I unlock it. Sometimes, forgetting the password causes me inconvenience as I cannot access important information.

建議: Your answer is clear but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases like "I will I will" and improve sentence flow with linking words. Also, clarify your methods with specific examples.

範例: First of all, I write important tasks down, either in a notebook or on my phone, so I can refer to them later. Additionally, if something is very important, I ask a friend or family member to remind me.

× Yes, I sometimes forgot.

✓ Yes, I sometimes forget.

The sentence refers to a habitual action in the present, so the present tense 'forget' should be used instead of the past tense 'forgot'.

× I sometimes forget my appointment with my dentist because I had a headache schedule.

✓ I sometimes forget my appointment with my dentist because I have a headache schedule.

The phrase 'had a headache schedule' is incorrect because the context is present habitual action; 'have' should be used instead of 'had'. Also, 'headache schedule' is unclear; it likely means a busy or headache-inducing schedule, but the correction focuses on tense consistency.

× I seldom pay attention to task like having an appointment with my dentist.

✓ I seldom pay attention to tasks like having an appointment with my dentist.

The noun 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to a general category of things, and the quantifier 'like' implies multiple examples.

× I have to remember my phone, my phone password because whenever I have to open my phone, I will need to type it.

✓ I have to remember my phone and my phone password because whenever I have to open my phone, I need to type it.

The sentence is repetitive and awkward; adding 'and' improves clarity. Also, 'will need' is changed to 'need' to match the habitual present tense context.

× However, I sometimes forget it and that will cause a lot of trouble.

✓ However, I sometimes forget it and that causes a lot of trouble.

The phrase 'will cause' suggests future certainty, but the context is habitual, so the simple present 'causes' is more appropriate.

× First of all I will write it down maybe in a note or on my phone.

✓ First of all, I will write it down, maybe in a note or on my phone.

Commas are needed after introductory phrases and to separate clauses for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× This will remind me later of my tasks and also I will I will try to let someone to remind me if the text is quite important.

✓ This will remind me later of my tasks, and I will try to get someone to remind me if the task is quite important.

The repeated phrase 'I will' is redundant and removed. 'Let someone to remind me' is incorrect; 'get someone to remind me' is the correct form. Also, 'text' is corrected to 'task' to match context.