记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了记忆能力强，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复。建议简化句子，注意时态和单复数，使用连词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things, especially dates and numbers. To improve my memory, I play memory games and use my smartphone to set reminders. I also write important notes on sticky notes to help me remember.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，情感表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，增加连贯性，使回答更具体。

範例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which made me feel very frustrated and disappointed. I immediately apologized and gave her a gift to make up for it. This experience taught me to use reminders and notifications to avoid forgetting important dates.

建議: 回答不完整且句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议简化句子，补充完整内容，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my academic assignments and their deadlines. Besides that, I also keep track of my meal times, exercise schedule, and family responsibilities like household chores.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，句子不连贯。建议使用正确的表达方式，补充完整句子，并合理使用连接词。

範例: I usually remember important things by writing them down in notebooks or on sticky notes placed in visible areas. Additionally, I use digital tools like setting reminders on my smartphone and using To-Do List apps to keep track of tasks.

× I also played a memory games to enhance my memory ability and often remember something important with the digital device such as my smartphone.

✓ I also played memory games to enhance my memory ability and often remember something important with digital devices such as my smartphone.

这里的“a memory games”中，“games”是复数，前面不应该加不定冠词“a”，应直接用复数形式“memory games”。

× Use the reminders to remember my things and also I write down the important things on the notebooks or the sticky notes.

✓ I use reminders to remember my things and also write down important things in notebooks or on sticky notes.

“Use the reminders”缺少主语，应加“I”。“write down the important things on the notebooks or the sticky notes”中，“notebooks”前不需要定冠词“the”，且“sticky notes”前应加介词“on”。

× Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday.

✓ Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× It's very frustrated and disappointed and I immediately apologize and made-up a gift for her.

✓ I was very frustrated and disappointed, and I immediately apologized and made up a gift for her.

“It's very frustrated and disappointed”中，“frustrated”和“disappointed”是形容人的情绪，应用过去时态“I was”。“immediately apologize and made-up”时态不一致，应统一为过去时态“apologized”和“made up”，且“made up”不加连字符。

× It remind me of the importance of remember the important thing by useful ways such as set reminders and notifications.

✓ It reminded me of the importance of remembering important things by useful ways such as setting reminders and notifications.

“It remind me”主谓不一致，应为“reminded”。“importance of remember”应为“importance of remembering”。“set reminders”应改为动名词形式“setting reminders”。

× In my daily life, I need to remember my daily routine such as the academic assignment tasks and deadlines and also some daily routine related to my meal time, the exercise time and also some family responsibilities such as the time of household choice and also I should remember the.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember my daily routines such as academic assignments, tasks, and deadlines, as well as daily routines related to my meal times, exercise times, and some family responsibilities such as household chores, and I should remember them.

“daily routine”应为复数“daily routines”，以匹配后文多个事项。“academic assignment tasks”应拆分为“academic assignments, tasks”。“the time of household choice”表达不清，应为“household chores”。句尾不完整，补充“and I should remember them”。

× I often remember important things by using the notebooks.

✓ I often remember important things by using notebooks.

“the notebooks”前不需要定冠词“the”，因为这里泛指笔记本。

× I just write them down on the notebooks in the sticky notes and the place in the attractive places.

✓ I just write them down in notebooks or on sticky notes and place them in attractive places.

“write them down on the notebooks in the sticky notes”介词使用错误，应为“in notebooks or on sticky notes”。“the place in the attractive places”表达重复且错误，应为“place them in attractive places”。

× Also, I use the digital technology such as set remember on my smartphone and use the To Do List apps which can be.

✓ Also, I use digital technology such as setting reminders on my smartphone and use To Do List apps which can help me.

“set remember”应为动名词形式“setting reminders”。“the digital technology”前不需要定冠词“the”。句尾不完整，补充“which can help me”。