记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence structure aro natural korte hobe. Apnar uttor ta besh short, tai aro kichu supporting details add koren. For example, apni kibhabe mone rakhte paren seta bolte paren.

範例: I'm not usually good at memorising things, but if I have to remember something important, I make sure to focus and memorize it carefully. For instance, when I study for exams, I use repetition to help me remember key points.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence gulo besh long ar confusing. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke sohoje ar spasto vabe bolte. Linking words use koren jate uttor ta logical hoy.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, during my ICT exam, I studied the topic of encoder and decoder, but because I was very nervous, I couldn't remember the details during the exam.

建議: Apnar uttor e sentence gulo incomplete ar repetitive. Apni chesta korun complete sentence use korte ar ekta coherent uttor dite. Specific details add koren jate uttor ta bhalo lage.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember various things such as math formulas, biology concepts, physics laws, and sometimes English vocabulary or subtitles to improve my language skills.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar ar clarity problem ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke sohoje ar spasto vabe bolte. Linking words use koren ar example dite paren jate uttor ta bhalo hoy.

範例: I usually remember important things by organizing the topics clearly. For example, I divide the subject into parts and focus on each part carefully, which helps me recall the information when I need it.

× Not usually, but if something I have to remember it, I definitely memorize it.

✓ Not usually, but if there is something I have to remember, I definitely memorize it.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and the use of 'if something I have to remember it' is incorrect. The correct form is 'if there is something I have to remember' to properly introduce the conditional clause. Also, 'it' is unnecessary and should be removed to avoid redundancy.

× Yes, in my ICT exam I learned about encoder and decoder topic but when I was in exam the exam pressured me like I was not in my mind and forget about the topic.

✓ Yes, in my ICT exam I learned about the encoder and decoder topic, but when I was in the exam, the exam pressured me so much that I was not in my right mind and forgot about the topic.

The sentence has multiple tense and article issues. 'Forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past context. 'In exam' should be 'in the exam' to use the definite article correctly. Also, 'like I was not in my mind' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I was not in my right mind'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I need to remember some math formulas and also. Biology formulas. Math formulas, Physics laws. English subtitles.

✓ I need to remember some math formulas, biology formulas, physics laws, and English subtitles.

The original sentences are fragmented and have inconsistent capitalization and punctuation. 'Biology' and 'Physics' should not be capitalized unless at the beginning of a sentence. The list should be combined into one sentence with proper commas and conjunctions. Also, 'formulas' and 'laws' are countable and plural, so 'some' is appropriate.

× Specially organizing a topic as a subject and when the topic is about I needed the topic, I Simply put an effort on the subject. That's why that's how I remember something important.

✓ I especially organize a topic as a subject, and when I need the topic, I simply put effort into the subject. That's how I remember something important.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect word order. 'Specially' should be 'especially'. The phrase 'when the topic is about I needed the topic' is unclear and corrected to 'when I need the topic'. 'Simply put an effort on the subject' is corrected to 'simply put effort into the subject' for proper preposition use. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.