记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive (e.g., mentioning both keys and phones separately). Try to make your response more concise and use linking words to improve flow. For example, you could combine similar ideas and use connectors like 'and' or 'so'.

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget where I put items like my keys and phone. Therefore, I usually rely on notes and reminders to help me remember important information.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat long and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words like 'so' or 'because' to connect ideas. Also, watch for grammar and sentence clarity.

範例: Yes, I recently forgot to submit an important assignment before the deadline, so I emailed my instructor to explain the reason for the delay and apologize.

建議: Your answer covers the question but is a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Use linking words like 'such as' or 'for example' to organize your ideas clearly. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'I have to'.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember things such as bus times, clocking in for my placement, and my shift schedules. To help with this, I keep notes in my calendar.

建議: Your answer is relevant and includes an example, which is good. However, there are minor errors and some repetition ('important important'). Try to use linking words like 'for example' smoothly and check for repetition. Also, clarify the app's name if possible.

範例: I use an app on my phone called Cancel Calendar to help me remember important events. For example, I write down upcoming tasks, and the app sends me reminders before they are due, which is very convenient.

× I often forget where I put my keys, my phones, and I struggle with remembering names and faces, and I usually rely on keeping notes and reminders for everything.

✓ I often forget where I put my keys, my phone, and I struggle with remembering names and faces, and I usually rely on keeping notes and reminders for everything.

The word 'phones' is incorrect here because it refers to multiple phones, but typically a person has one phone. The singular form 'phone' is appropriate in this context.

× Yes, it was very recently I forgot to submit my one of the important assignment before it was due and I had to send an e-mail to my instructor to let her know about that and I also told her the reason behind the delay.

✓ Yes, very recently I forgot to submit one of my important assignments before it was due, and I had to send an e-mail to my instructor to let her know about it, and I also told her the reason behind the delay.

The phrase 'my one of the important assignment' is incorrect. It should be 'one of my important assignments' to correctly express that the assignment belongs to the speaker and is one among several. Also, 'about that' is better as 'about it' for clarity and naturalness.

× In my daily life, I have to remember the time I have to take the bus, I have to go to my placement clock in and then I have to have to remember my shift timings and when it ends so that I don't forget anything.

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember the time I have to take the bus, I have to go to my placement to clock in, and then I have to remember my shift timings and when it ends so that I don't forget anything.

The phrase 'go to my placement clock in' is incorrect. The preposition 'to' is needed before 'clock in' to indicate purpose. Also, the repeated 'have to have to' is redundant and should be corrected to a single 'have to'.

× I have this app in my phone called Cancel Calendar that helps me remembering things.

✓ I have this app on my phone called Cancel Calendar that helps me remember things.

The verb 'helps' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'helps me remembering' should be 'helps me remember'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to something on a phone.

× For example, if I have something important important coming up, I usually write it in my calendar and it sends me a reminder before it's due, so it's pretty convenient for me.

✓ For example, if I have something important coming up, I usually write it in my calendar and it sends me a reminder before it's due, so it's pretty convenient for me.

The word 'important' is repeated twice, which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate improves clarity and correctness.