记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then support it with a specific example. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget information quickly. For example, if someone tells me something now, I might forget it within seconds.

建議: Provide a more detailed and coherent answer by using linking words and expanding on the situation. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, my sister told me the password for our Internet, but I forgot it within a week because I didn't write it down.

建議: Clarify your ideas and use correct vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Avoid unclear phrases and incomplete thoughts.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, especially my responsibilities. For example, I have to remember whether I have to play sports or complete my tasks.

建議: Give a clear and structured answer with specific methods you use. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

範例: There are several ways I remember important things. For example, I write them on sticky notes and place them where I can see them easily.

× Actually no 'cause I am a very bad person and memorizing cause for example, if you tell me, if you just tell me now, I think I I will just forget it and in the next seconds.

✓ Actually no, because I am very bad at memorizing. For example, if you tell me something now, I think I will just forget it in the next few seconds.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'cause' and 'and' as conjunctions, causing confusion and run-on sentences. Replacing 'cause' with 'because' and splitting the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes I have, my sister told me the password of of our Internet and I just forgot it in just one week.

✓ Yes, I have. My sister told me the password for our Internet, and I forgot it in just one week.

The phrase 'password of of our Internet' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' when referring to passwords. Also, adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× Umm, there's a lot of things I want to remember in our in my daily life, especially the players.

✓ Umm, there are a lot of things I want to remember in my daily life, especially the players.

'There's' is a contraction of 'there is' which is singular, but 'a lot of things' is plural, so 'there are' should be used for subject-verb agreement.

× For instance, if I play or not oil obligations.

✓ For instance, whether I play or not, or my obligations.

The phrase 'play or not oil obligations' is unclear and contains a preposition error. Replacing 'oil' with 'or' and restructuring the phrase clarifies the meaning.

× There's a lot of tips to remember important things. One of them I I I directly write write the important things on a sticky note and or I just see them in a shot.

✓ There are a lot of tips to remember important things. One of them is that I directly write the important things on a sticky note, or I just look at them briefly.

The original sentence has repeated words and incorrect conjunction usage ('and or'). Correcting these and improving sentence structure enhances clarity and grammatical correctness.