记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating words like "I I" and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor grammar issues such as "a really boring subjects" to "really boring subjects."

範例: Yes, I think I have a good memory because I found it easy to memorize subjects like history and biology during high school. In fact, I enjoyed memorizing information while studying.

建議: Your answer needs to be more complete and coherent. Avoid filler words like "uh" and incomplete sentences such as "I feel really." Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific feelings or consequences of forgetting the birthday.

範例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's 25th birthday because of my hectic work schedule. I had planned a surprise for her, but unfortunately, I missed it and felt very guilty about it.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid repetition like "serve the custom, serve the patients" and correct minor grammar errors. Use linking words to organize your points logically.

範例: As a pharmacist, I need to remember medication names, dosages, and safe pharmacy practices to provide the best service and ensure patient safety.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains many filler words like "uh." Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid repetition such as "to to." Use linking words to explain how the app helps you and provide a clear conclusion.

範例: I use the Reminders app on my phone to set alerts for important events or appointments. This helps me avoid missing anything despite my busy work schedule.

× I found it really simple to memorize a really boring subjects like history and biology in my high school years.

✓ I found it really simple to memorize really boring subjects like history and biology in my high school years.

The word 'subjects' is plural, so the article 'a' before it is incorrect. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× Unfortunately, due to a hectic work schedule, I have forgotten her birthday and forgot to wish her on her birthday.

✓ Unfortunately, due to a hectic work schedule, I forgot her birthday and forgot to wish her on her birthday.

The sentence mixes present perfect 'have forgotten' with simple past 'forgot'. Since the event is a specific past incident, simple past tense 'forgot' should be used consistently.

× As a pharmacist, I would constantly remember about medications, the dosage of medications and safe pharmacy practices in order to serve the custom, serve the patients in the most for the best service and ensure medication safety to the patients.

✓ As a pharmacist, I would constantly remember medications, the dosage of medications, and safe pharmacy practices in order to serve the customers, serve the patients with the best service, and ensure medication safety for the patients.

The verb 'remember' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'serve the custom' is incorrect; it should be 'serve the customers'. The phrase 'in the most for the best service' is awkward and corrected to 'with the best service'. The preposition 'to' after 'ensure medication safety' should be 'for'.

× I use Reminders app on my phone to set up a reminder for me to to remember certain, uh, important events or schedules that I probably will miss out due to my hectic, uh, work schedule.

✓ I use the Reminders app on my phone to set up a reminder for me to remember certain important events or schedules that I will probably miss due to my hectic work schedule.

The app name should be preceded by the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'miss out' is informal and unnecessary here; 'miss' is sufficient. Also, the repeated 'to' is a typo and should be corrected.