记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，存在重复和语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和结构。

範例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, when I was a child, I could remember difficult English words and even long poems.

建議: 回答内容不连贯，有语法错误和表达不清。建议使用连贯的句子，正确表达事件经过，并避免无关信息。

範例: Yes, I forgot my ID card last week when I went to take an English test. I had to return home to get it, which made me late for the test.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达需要记住的事项，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember to bring my computer to school and take my medicine because I often have headaches in the morning or evening.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议完整表达使用的工具和方法，并使用连贯的句子。

範例: I usually take notes and use reminder apps on my phone to help me remember important things.

× It's a terrible things I know.

✓ It's a terrible thing, I know.

这里'things'是复数形式，但前面用的是单数'this'，应保持一致，改为单数'thing'。

× I can remember some difficult English words words and I can I can remember a long poetry in.

✓ I could remember some difficult English words and I could remember a long poem.

描述过去能力时应使用过去时态'could'，而不是现在时'can'。另外，'poetry'是不可数名词，表示诗歌的整体，单个诗应使用'poem'。

× I had this experience last week. I took my English test but I forgot to to take my ID card.

✓ I had this experience last week. I took my English test but I forgot to take my ID card.

这里重复了'to'，应删除多余的'to'。

× It's a terrible things I know.

✓ It's a terrible thing, I know.

'things'是复数，前面用的是单数形式，需统一为单数'thing'。

× So fortunately I cannot stay up late.

✓ So fortunately I could not stay up late.

描述过去发生的事情，应该用过去时态'could not'，而不是现在时态'cannot'。

× I need to take my computer to go to the school and other.

✓ I need to take my computer to go to school and other places.

'go to school'中'school'前不加定冠词'the'，且'other'后应补充名词，如'places'。

× I always got headache in in the morning or in the evening.

✓ I always get headaches in the morning or in the evening.

'got'是过去式，描述习惯应用一般现在时'get'；'headache'应用复数形式'headaches'表示多次头痛；'in the morning'和'in the evening'用法正确。

× I usually take some notes in my. In my form I have applications to and these applications can remind me something about something important.

✓ I usually take some notes. In my phone, I have applications that can remind me of important things.

'in my'后缺少名词，推测应为'phone'；'applications to'应改为'applications that'；'remind me something about'应改为'remind me of'。