记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够完整且语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持观点，注意语法和句子完整性。

範例: Yes, I used to be good at memorising things when I was younger. For example, I could easily remember poems and facts at primary school. However, as I entered senior high school, I found it more challenging due to the increased amount of information.

建議: 回答内容混乱且表达不清，存在语法和词汇错误。建议回答时用简洁明了的句子，举具体例子说明忘记的重要事情。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once I forgot to bring my keys and another time I missed an important exam because I didn't remember the date.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不连贯，缺少连贯的句子和具体细节。建议回答时列举具体需要记住的内容，并用连词连接句子。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important numbers like my phone number and prices of items. Also, I often have to remember locations when I travel to new places.

建議: 回答表达不够流畅，句子不完整。建议使用连贯的句子，详细说明记忆方法并举例。

範例: I usually repeat the information several times to memorize it. If it's very important, I write it down on a piece of paper or keep a note on my phone so I can check it anytime.

× When I was a primary school student, my mom always told me that I'm good at memorizing things, but after entering the Senior High School I found that I didn't really good at memorizing things so I choose to.

✓ When I was a primary school student, my mom always told me that I was good at memorizing things, but after entering Senior High School I found that I wasn't really good at memorizing things so I chose to.

这里涉及过去时态的使用。原句中“I'm good”应改为过去时“was good”，因为描述的是过去的情况。同样，“didn't really good”结构错误，应为“wasn't really good”。“choose”应改为过去式“chose”，因为动作发生在过去。

× I think I've always forgotten something important in my daily life, so as small as I didn't remember to take my keys and this beard as I mistake the examination.

✓ I think I've often forgotten something important in my daily life, such as forgetting to take my keys and this beard, and I made a mistake in the examination.

原句结构混乱，表达不清。“so as small as”用法错误，应改为“such as”表示举例。句子中“this beard”可能是“this board”或其他词的误写，需根据上下文确认。最后部分“as I mistake the examination”应改为“and I made a mistake in the examination”，符合英语表达习惯。

× Some figures such as my phone number and the. Price of things or some? Place to a location.

✓ Some figures such as my phone number, the price of things, or some places and locations.

原句断句错误，标点使用不当，导致句子不完整。应去掉多余的句号和问号，调整为完整的并列结构。

× Usually I memorize it several times until I remember it, or I will write it down on a paper and take it, or I would. Take it by my side.

✓ Usually I memorize it several times until I remember it, or I write it down on a paper and take it with me, or I keep it by my side.

原句中“or I will write”与“or I would. Take it by my side”结构不连贯，且“take it”后缺少介词短语，表达不完整。应统一时态，去掉不必要的句号，补充完整表达。