记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语言较为口语化且有语法错误，如'memorizing'拼写不统一，表达不够自然流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法和拼写准确性。

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I meet many people and see many pictures every day, so I don't have enough time to remember everything.

建議: 回答内容具体，但表达不够连贯，部分词汇使用不当，如'boarding pot'应为'boiling pot'。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意词汇准确性。

範例: Yes, I once forgot I was cooking last month. I was sitting on the sofa watching TV, and when I noticed the boiling pot, it was almost on fire.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，如'for'后缺少内容。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确，表达更清晰。

範例: I need to remember many things in my daily life. As a senior high school student, the most important is to complete my homework for nine subjects. Also, I have to remember to take my medicine regularly.

建議: 回答中存在词汇错误，如'Frederick'应为'fridge'，表达不够自然。建议使用正确词汇并简洁表达。

範例: To remember important things, I usually write them down on a paper list or sticky notes and stick them on the fridge or computer desk.

× I'm bad at memorizing things just because I meet many people and many pictures every day.

✓ I'm bad at memorizing things just because I meet many people and see many pictures every day.

原句中“meet many pictures”不合适，应该用“see many pictures”，因为人们通常是“看见”图片而不是“遇见”图片。这里涉及动词搭配问题，属于单复数和动词使用的错误。

× I forgot that I was cooking last month.

✓ I forgot that I had been cooking last month.

这里描述的是过去某一时间之前发生的动作，应该用过去完成时“had been cooking”，表示在过去某时之前已经开始的动作。

× When I finally found that boarding pot, it was terrible.

✓ When I finally found that boiling pot, it was terrible.

原句中“boarding pot”是拼写错误，应为“boiling pot”，这里属于词汇拼写错误，不属于语法错误，但为了准确表达需要更正。

× I really need to remember a lot As a Senior High student, the most important thing for me to remember is my homework.

✓ I really need to remember a lot. As a Senior High student, the most important thing for me to remember is my homework.

原句中缺少句号导致句子结构不完整，属于句子结构错误，但根据指示只纠正语法问题。这里加上句号使句子完整。

× Also, I need to remember to have some medicine for.

✓ Also, I need to remember to take some medicine.

“remember to have some medicine for”结构不正确，应该用“remember to take some medicine”，动词搭配错误，属于介词使用错误。

× I often write it down on the paper list or on the sticky notes and I stick them everywhere, for example on the Frederick or on the table computer.

✓ I often write it down on a paper list or on sticky notes and stick them everywhere, for example on the fridge or on the computer table.

“on the Frederick”应为“on the fridge”，“on the table computer”应为“on the computer table”，词汇错误和介词搭配错误。这里更正为正确的词汇和介词搭配。