记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Попробуйте использовать более разнообразную лексику и избегать повторений, например, вместо "bad at memorizing" можно сказать "find it challenging to remember". Также старайтесь делать ответ более естественным и связным.

範例: I find it challenging to remember things, particularly names and dates, which makes memorising quite difficult for me.

建議: Избегайте грамматических ошибок, таких как "forgot" вместо "forget". Старайтесь строить предложения более плавно и логично, используя связующие слова.

範例: Yes, I often forget important things, such as events or birthdays, because I find it hard to memorize details.

建議: Обратите внимание на грамматическую структуру и согласование глаголов. Используйте связующие слова для плавности речи и избегайте повторов, например, "and and".

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember to drink plenty of water, complete house chores, and read books because these have become my habits.

建議: Используйте правильные формы глаголов, например, "forgot" должно быть "forget". Также старайтесь строить предложения более связно и использовать разнообразную лексику.

範例: I try to make a to-do list because without it, I can easily forget important tasks. I also use online apps to help me keep track.

× For me it is a usual thing to forgot something important because as I've just mentioned, it is quite difficult to memorize, even if it is something like event or birthday.

✓ For me it is a usual thing to forget something important because as I've just mentioned, it is quite difficult to memorize, even if it is something like an event or birthday.

The verb 'forgot' is the past tense form, but here the infinitive 'to forget' is required after 'to'. Also, 'event' needs an article 'an' before it because it is a singular countable noun.

× For me it is a usual thing to forgot something important because as I've just mentioned, it is quite difficult to memorize, even if it is something like event or birthday.

✓ For me it is a usual thing to forget something important because as I've just mentioned, it is quite difficult to memorize, even if it is something like an event or birthday.

The noun 'event' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'an' before it.

× And the main things that I should remember to do in one day is drinking a lot of water. Doing house chores and and read some book because I made it as a habit.

✓ And the main things that I should remember to do in one day are drinking a lot of water, doing house chores, and reading some books because I made it a habit.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, the activities should be parallel in form: 'drinking', 'doing', and 'reading'. 'Some book' should be plural 'some books' to match the context.

× And the main things that I should remember to do in one day is drinking a lot of water. Doing house chores and and read some book because I made it as a habit.

✓ And the main things that I should remember to do in one day are drinking a lot of water, doing house chores, and reading some books because I made it a habit.

After 'things to do', the verbs should be in the '-ing' form to maintain parallel structure. 'Read' should be 'reading'.

× And the main things that I should remember to do in one day is drinking a lot of water. Doing house chores and and read some book because I made it as a habit.

✓ And the main things that I should remember to do in one day are drinking a lot of water, doing house chores, and reading some books because I made it a habit.

The phrase 'made it as a habit' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'made it a habit'.

× I try to make To Do List because without it I can easily forgot about this thing.

✓ I try to make a To Do List because without it I can easily forget about this thing.

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'forgot' should be 'forget'. Also, 'To Do List' needs an article 'a' before it.