记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tự nhiên hơn. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích thêm với các chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

範例: Yes, I am fairly good at memorising simple things, but I often struggle to remember long numbers. For example, I can easily recall my daily tasks, but I tend to forget phone numbers after reading them once.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng phong phú hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I once forgot my friend's birthday, so I missed her party. To make up for it, I took her out for dinner the next day.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó dùng liên từ để thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Từ vựng nên phù hợp và chính xác với ngữ cảnh.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, both simple and complex. For example, I have to remember to turn on the cooker before I start cooking.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: I usually use apps on my mobile phone, like the calendar or reminder apps, to note down important tasks such as assignments and tests that I need to complete.

× I have a decent brain so if if I have to remember something easy I can't remember it quite good.

✓ I have a decent brain, so if I have to remember something easy, I can't remember it quite well.

The adverb 'good' is incorrectly used to modify the verb 'remember'. The correct adverb form is 'well'. Also, there is a repeated word 'if'. The sentence needs commas for clarity.

× But when it comes to the long numbers I will definitely forget it after read it.

✓ But when it comes to long numbers, I will definitely forget them after reading them.

The verb 'read' should be in the gerund form 'reading' after the preposition 'after'. Also, 'long numbers' is plural, so pronouns should be plural ('them'). Commas improve sentence clarity.

× One time I forgot my friend's birthday so I didn't come to her birthday party and then I have to compensate her with dinner after that.

✓ One time I forgot my friend's birthday, so I didn't come to her birthday party, and then I had to compensate her with dinner after that.

The phrase 'have to' should be in past tense 'had to' to maintain past tense consistency. Commas are added for clarity.

× There are abundant things that I have to remember in my daily life.

✓ There are many things that I have to remember in my daily life.

The word 'abundant' is an adjective typically used with uncountable nouns. 'Things' is countable, so 'many' is the correct quantifier.

× They are both complicated things and simple things but such as I have to turn the cook the cook button on the cooker.

✓ They are both complicated and simple things, such as having to turn the cook button on the cooker.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive ('cook the cook button'). The correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× I mostly use some apps on my mobile phone such as Windows or the calendar apps to write down my assignment or my test that I have to finish in my daily life.

✓ I mostly use some apps on my mobile phone, such as Windows or calendar apps, to write down my assignments or tests that I have to finish in my daily life.

The article 'the' before 'calendar apps' is unnecessary. Also, 'assignment' and 'test' should be plural to match the context. Commas improve readability.