记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat long and a bit unclear. Try to give a direct response first, then add a clear supporting detail using linking words. Avoid redundancy and complex sentence structures.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially when they are important to me. For instance, I remember important dates and events because I pay extra attention to them.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add details using linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot about my physics exam until a day before, which made it very hard to prepare in time.

建議: Your answer is a bit vague and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more specific and use correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: In daily life, I need to remember things like where I put my keys and important work items. These small details help me stay organised and avoid wasting time.

建議: Your answer is informative but a bit repetitive and lacks clear linking. Try to organise your ideas with linking words and avoid redundancy.

範例: I usually write important things in the notes app on my phone because it helps me remember them better. Moreover, it's very convenient since I can check my notes anytime I want.

× Well, I'm not certain about it, but still I could say that there are specific things which I keep in my memory for a long time on which I have paid more attention because it seems more important to me.

✓ Well, I'm not certain about it, but still I could say that there are specific things which I keep in my memory for a long time on which I have paid more attention because they seem more important to me.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'seem' instead of 'seems' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to plural subjects.

× Once I didn't remember about my physics exam in my last school year and I came to know about it a day before exam and it was really difficult for me to prepare it.

✓ Once I didn't remember my physics exam in my last school year and I came to know about it a day before the exam and it was really difficult for me to prepare for it.

The phrase 'remember about' is incorrect; 'remember' does not require 'about'. Also, 'a day before exam' needs the definite article 'the' before 'exam'. Additionally, 'prepare it' should be 'prepare for it' because 'prepare' is followed by 'for' when referring to an event or task.

× Well, there are several things which we had to retain in our minds for daily purposes, such as where we put our keys or where is our essential things for work, that sort of things.

✓ Well, there are several things which we have to retain in our minds for daily purposes, such as where we put our keys or where our essential things for work are, that sort of thing.

The tense should be present ('have to') to match the question about daily life. 'Where is our essential things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' and the word order should be 'where our essential things for work are'. Also, 'that sort of things' should be 'that sort of thing' because 'sort' is singular.

× For me, I just write imperative things in my notes app in my phone it all as it helps me to retain memory of those things more and it's very convenient to use that app and I can use it like anytime.

✓ For me, I just write important things in my notes app on my phone, as it helps me to retain memory of those things better and it's very convenient to use that app anytime.

'Imperative things' is incorrect; 'important things' is the correct phrase. 'In my phone' should be 'on my phone' because apps are on devices. The phrase 'it all' is unnecessary and confusing, so it is removed. 'Retain memory of those things more' is better expressed as 'retain memory of those things better'. 'I can use it like anytime' is corrected to 'I can use it anytime' for natural phrasing.