记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且有重复词汇。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达方式。

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. When I was in middle school, I often found it difficult to remember English words and other information. People would tell me things, but I would forget them quickly.

建議: 回答内容混乱，语法和表达不清晰。建议先明确主题句，然后用简洁的句子描述具体事件，避免语法错误。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. When I was eight years old, I forgot to go home for lunch. My mother was very angry because she thought I was lost, but I was actually playing with my friends.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，合理使用连接词，具体说明需要记住的事项。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important dates, the time to go to school, and deadlines for homework. Also, I have to remember to practice running every day because it's very important to me.

建議: 表达不够流畅，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子，合理使用连接词，清晰表达记忆方法。

範例: I usually write down important things or take notes on my phone to help me remember. I also tell other people so they can remind me if I forget.

× Not at all. And when I was in the middle school I'm hardly to remember everything such as English words or other things.

✓ Not at all. And when I was in middle school, I could hardly remember everything such as English words or other things.

这里的错误是时态和表达方式不正确。'I'm hardly to remember'是不正确的表达，应该用过去时态的情态动词'could'来表示过去的能力，且'hardly'应放在情态动词后面。建议使用'could hardly remember'。

× And often people often tell me things and I'm very very fast to forget it.

✓ And often people tell me things and I forget them very quickly.

这里'fast to forget it'的表达不自然，应该用副词'quickly'修饰动词'forget'，且'it'应改为复数'them'，因为前面提到的是多件事情。

× I think it's bad on it.

✓ I think it's bad at it.

短语应为'bad at'表示某人在某方面不好，'bad on'是不正确的搭配。

× Yes, of course I that's why I was eight years ago that I forget a very important thing to that age is forget to home to eat the lunch and mommy.

✓ Yes, of course. That's why eight years ago I forgot a very important thing at that age: I forgot to go home to eat lunch, and my mom...

这里时态混乱，'was eight years ago'应为时间状语，主句应使用过去时'forgot'。另外，句子结构混乱，需调整顺序和表达。

× My mom is very angry for me, so as she thinks I'm lost, but actually I'm the play with my friend.

✓ My mom was very angry with me because she thought I was lost, but actually I was playing with my friend.

'angry for me'应为'angry with me'，表示对某人生气。'she thinks'应为过去时'she thought'，'I'm the play'语法错误，应为'was playing'。

× I need to remember the date of the date, the time to get to school and I remember the homework finish time and I need to practice such as running and it's very important I use I running every day.

✓ I need to remember the date, the time to get to school, and the homework deadline. I also need to practice, such as running, which is very important. I run every day.

'date of the date'重复且不正确，'homework finish time'应为'homework deadline'或'homework finish time'。'I use I running'语法错误，应改为'I run'。句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。

× I'd like to write down or take a note on the phone to let me remember the important things and I'd like to tell the other people so when I hardly when I get forget it so other people could could Remember Me.

✓ I'd like to write things down or take notes on my phone to help me remember important things. I'd also like to tell other people so that if I forget, they can remind me.

'to let me remember'表达不自然，应为'to help me remember'。'when I hardly when I get forget it'语法混乱，应简化为'if I forget'。'could could Remember Me'重复且错误，应为'they can remind me'。