记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语句不够流畅且重复较多，建议减少口头语如“uh”，并且结构上应更清晰，直接回答问题后用具体例子支持。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially when it comes to exam knowledge. For example, I often remember important facts by associating them with my past experiences or conversations with friends.

建議: 回答内容具体，但表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once I took my phone to eat, but after walking through the door, I realized I had left it behind, which was very annoying.

建議: 回答中信息较杂乱，建议先给出主题句，再用逻辑清晰的细节支持，避免语法错误。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule. For example, I study in the morning and afternoon, chat with my girlfriend in the evening, and then relax before dinner.

建議: 表达较清楚，但语法和用词有误，建议使用更准确的表达和连接词，使内容更自然。

範例: I usually remember important things by repeating my plans in my mind. However, in special situations, I write them down on paper and review the notes every couple of hours to ensure I don't forget.

× Uh, uh, actually I think I'm good at memory things like, uh, memory in the exam knowledge and, uh, remember the, uh, remember the, uh, the experience before at playing or chat with, chat with friends like that.

✓ Uh, uh, actually I think I'm good at memorizing things like, uh, memory for exam knowledge and, uh, remembering experiences from playing or chatting with friends like that.

原句中“memory things”用词不当，应使用动名词形式“memorizing things”表示擅长记忆某事；“remember the experience before at playing or chat with”结构混乱，动词形式不统一，应改为“remembering experiences from playing or chatting”以保持动名词形式一致。

× Yeah, that's an interesting topic. So I forget something important, like when I want to eat or eat something and take my phone and then I walk through a door, I forget to, I forget the phone I take in my hand.

✓ Yeah, that's an interesting topic. So I forgot something important, like when I wanted to eat or eat something and took my phone and then I walked through a door, I forgot the phone I was holding in my hand.

描述过去发生的事情时，动词应使用过去时态。原句中“forget”、“want”、“take”、“walk”均应改为过去式“forgot”、“wanted”、“took”、“walked”以符合时态一致性。

× So I forget to, I forget the phone I take in my hand.

✓ So I forgot the phone I was holding in my hand.

“take in my hand”表达不自然，正确表达应为“was holding in my hand”，使用进行时态表示当时正在进行的动作。

× Yeah, I need to remember the plan I did before. Like, so I have to study in the morning and afternoon, I need to chat with my girlfriend and dinner and at the evening, early evening, maybe I should be relaxed. That's a very strict.

✓ Yeah, I need to remember the plan I made before. Like, I have to study in the morning and afternoon, chat with my girlfriend, and have dinner. In the early evening, maybe I should relax. That's very strict.

“the plan I did before”中“did”用词不当，应为“made”；“chat with my girlfriend and dinner”缺少动词，应补充“have dinner”；“at the evening, early evening”介词使用错误，应为“in the early evening”；“maybe I should be relaxed”表达不自然，应为“maybe I should relax”；“That's a very strict”缺少名词，改为“That’s very strict”更通顺。

× Mostly I always repeat the plan in my brain, but in some special situation I perform to write down the plan in the paper and I take the paper uh in two hours I look at the paper to remember important things.

✓ Mostly I always repeat the plan in my mind, but in some special situations I try to write down the plan on paper, and after two hours I look at the paper to remember important things.

“repeat the plan in my brain”表达不自然，改为“in my mind”；“some special situation”应为复数“situations”；“perform to write down”用词错误，应为“try to write down”；“in the paper”应为“on paper”；“I take the paper uh in two hours”表达混乱，改为“after two hours”。