记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to keep your answer clear and avoid confusing or incorrect words like 'dog' which seems out of context. Use simple and correct tenses, and complete your sentences to make your point clear. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: When I was a child, I was very good at memorizing things, but now I find it harder to remember details as I get older.

建議: Make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence. Avoid repeating words and incomplete sentences. Provide a specific example of something important you forgot to make your answer more detailed and natural.

範例: Yes, I often forget important things because of my hectic schedule. For example, I once forgot an important meeting because I didn't write it down.

建議: Focus on giving a clear and complete answer. Avoid repeating phrases and incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain why remembering to be positive is important.

範例: I need to remember to always stay positive because daily challenges can be stressful, and a positive mindset helps me overcome them.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repeated words and making sentences more concise. Use linking words to explain the process clearly and naturally.

範例: To remember important things, I write them down on paper or my phone, and then I review the notes regularly so I don't forget.

× When I was a child, I think I am very I was very good at memorizing things, but now that I am already a dog, I think it somehow decrease decreases in in length.

✓ When I was a child, I think I was very good at memorizing things, but now that I am already a dog, I think it somehow decreases in length.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'I think I am very I was very good' is redundant and confusing; it should be 'I think I was very good' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'decrease' should be 'decreases' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'already a dog' seems incorrect but is not a grammar issue per instructions.

× I just memorize things that have the.

✓ I just memorize things that I have.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject in the relative clause. Adding 'I' before 'have' completes the sentence and maintains present tense consistency.

× Yes, I think always because due to my hectic schedule I sometimes forgot or I often forgot the things, especially those important ones.

✓ Yes, I think always because due to my hectic schedule I sometimes forget or I often forget things, especially those important ones.

The verbs 'forgot' are in past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so present tense 'forget' is appropriate. Also, 'the things' is better as 'things' for natural phrasing.

× And one of those is is to remind me that.

✓ And one of those is to remind me of that.

The sentence has a repeated word 'is is' and lacks clarity. Removing the duplicate and adding 'of' after 'remind me' corrects the structure and meaning.

× I think I need to remember to always to always be positive because sometimes due to difficulties or challenges that I have encountered everyday in my daily life, I sometimes forgot dream.

✓ I think I need to remember to always be positive because sometimes, due to difficulties or challenges that I encounter every day in my daily life, I sometimes forget my dreams.

The phrase 'to always to always' is redundant; one 'to always' suffices. 'Have encountered' is past perfect but the sentence refers to ongoing challenges, so present tense 'encounter' is better. 'Forgot dream' is incorrect; it should be 'forget my dreams' to match subject and tense.

× In order to remember important things, I need to write it down on a paper or or or on my cell phone and I need to read back again so that I could not forget those important things that I needed to do in my daily life.

✓ In order to remember important things, I need to write them down on paper or on my cell phone and I need to read them again so that I do not forget those important things that I need to do in my daily life.

The sentence has repeated words 'or or or' which should be reduced to one 'or'. 'Write it down' should be 'write them down' to agree with plural 'things'. 'Read back again' is awkward; 'read them again' is clearer. 'Could not forget' is incorrect in this context; 'do not forget' fits better. 'Needed to do' should be 'need to do' to maintain present tense.