记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，且有多处语法和词汇错误。建议你回答时先明确主题句，然后用简洁的句子补充细节，避免重复和无关内容。

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget where I put my belongings. For example, during my last winter holiday in Guangzhou, I lost my passport at the airport, which caused me a lot of trouble.

建議: 回答内容不明确，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议你直接回答问题，说明忘记了什么重要的东西，并解释原因或感受，使用简单明了的句子。

範例: Yes, I once forgot my passport during a trip, which was very stressful because it cost me a lot of money to replace it.

建議: 回答较为完整，但有语法和词汇错误。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇。

範例: Before I go to school, I always double-check my backpack to make sure I have my charging cable and plug. This is important because I use my iPad for studying, and if the battery dies, I can't access important apps.

建議: 回答表达不够清晰，有语法错误和用词不当。建议先给出主题句，再用具体例子支持，注意句子连贯和词汇准确。

範例: I remember important things by learning from my past mistakes. For example, after losing my iPod once, I always double-check that I have it before leaving to avoid losing it again. This helps me stay organized and careful.

× Actually I think I'm quite poor and memorize things because I often forget where I put my belongings, like my airports or sounds, more items or for example less winter holiday.

✓ Actually I think I'm quite poor at memorizing things because I often forget where I put my belongings, like my passports or sounds, more items or for example last winter holiday.

这里“airports”应为“passports”，且“less winter holiday”应为“last winter holiday”，属于单复数和词汇错误。应使用正确的名词形式和词汇。

× I want to Guangzhou with my parents and when I came back I realized I had lost my airports.

✓ I went to Guangzhou with my parents and when I came back I realized I had lost my passports.

“want to Guangzhou”应为“went to Guangzhou”，且“airports”应为“passports”，这里涉及动词时态和单复数问题。

× Airports at the airport. Airport.

✓ Passports at the airport. Passport.

“Airports”应为“Passports”，保持单复数一致。

× Something important just just as I mentioned, I think the air posts is actually a luxury because expands me about 1000.

✓ Something important, just as I mentioned, I think the passports are actually a luxury because they cost me about 1000.

“air posts”应为“passports”，且“is”应为“are”，涉及单复数和主谓一致。

× So our losses on that time very anxiety.

✓ So our loss at that time caused a lot of anxiety.

原句缺少谓语动词，且表达不清，需调整句子结构。

× I think before I go to school I always make sure to double check my school back to see if I have my charging cable and plug with me.

✓ I think before I go to school I always make sure to double check my school bag to see if I have my charging cable and plug with me.

“school back”应为“school bag”，属于单复数和词汇错误。

× So remember this items help me stay prepared throughout day.

✓ So remembering these items helps me stay prepared throughout the day.

“this items”应为“these items”，且谓语动词需与主语一致。

× Actually, I tend to remember important things by learning from my past mistakes, past experiences.

✓ Actually, I tend to remember important things by learning from my past mistakes and past experiences.

缺少连词“and”，使句子更通顺。

× For example, after laughing something valuable, I always make sure to double check this crucial items just like unimagined my iPod to avoid similar problems in the future.

✓ For example, after losing something valuable, I always make sure to double check these crucial items, just like my iPod, to avoid similar problems in the future.

“laughing”应为“losing”，“this crucial items”应为“these crucial items”，且句子结构需调整。

× This methods help me stay more organized and careful.

✓ These methods help me stay more organized and careful.

“This methods”应为“These methods”，主谓一致错误。