记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免使用错误的词汇（如'note good'应为'not good'），并且回答应更简洁自然。

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things, but I can remember important deadlines well.

建議: 回答中语法错误严重，表达混乱，且内容不连贯。建议练习句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，确保表达清晰。

範例: Yes, I forgot my mom's birthday last month, which made me feel terrible. I apologized and took her out for dinner to make it up to her.

建議: 回答较为简单且有语法错误，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意句子完整性。

範例: As a full-time student, I need to remember important deadlines to complete my assignments on time.

建議: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，表达不够流畅。建议练习正确的句子结构和词汇使用，使回答更自然。

範例: I usually make a to-do list on my phone because it's convenient to note down important ideas and remember them later.

× I'm good at some things like the deadline of my arrangement, but I have to say I really note good at memory.

✓ I'm good at some things like the deadlines of my arrangements, but I have to say I am really not good at memory.

这里的arrangement和deadline应该用复数形式，因为指的是多个安排和多个截止日期。注意单复数的一致性。

× I really note good at memory.

✓ I am really not good at memory.

这里的note是错误的词，应该用not表示否定，且需要be动词am。

× The place is really difficult for me.

✓ That place is really difficult for me.

这里的The place指代不明确，应该用That place更准确。

× Yeah, actually I forgot my mom's post birthday last month so I throat terrible because there was impotent.

✓ Yeah, actually I forgot my mom's birthday last month so I felt terrible because it was important.

forgot是过去式正确，throat是错误单词，应为felt表示感觉，impotent拼写错误，应为important。

× I immediately apologized and tried to making it up for taking her out of dinner since they asked him MO.

✓ I immediately apologized and tried to make it up by taking her out to dinner since they asked me to.

try后面接动词不定式make，而不是making；taking her out of dinner应为taking her out to dinner；句子中they asked him MO不通顺，改为they asked me to更合理。

× Oh they're very real things I need to remember.

✓ Oh, there are very real things I need to remember.

这里的they're应为there are，且there be结构需要注意。

× Oh they're very real things I need to remember.

✓ Oh, there are very real things I need to remember.

这里应该用there are表示存在，而不是they're。

× I'm currently full time student so.

✓ I'm currently a full-time student, so...

缺少冠词a，full-time需要连字符，句子不完整需要补充。

× I have to remember the deadline of my arrangements so that I can do it well and don't forget it.

✓ I have to remember the deadlines of my arrangements so that I can do them well and not forget them.

deadline和arrangements应保持复数一致，do it和forget it应改为do them和forget them，指代复数。

× Oh, are you really? Make A to do list on my phone, you know.

✓ Oh, really? I make a to-do list on my phone, you know.

are you really不符合语境，应为really；Make首字母不应大写；to do list应为to-do list。

× It's much convenient whenever I come up with an important idea.

✓ It's much more convenient whenever I come up with an important idea.

convenient是形容词，前面需要more来构成比较级，much more convenient更合适。

× I just no dated down my phone so that I can remember it well.

✓ I just note down on my phone so that I can remember it well.

no dated是错误表达，应为note down表示记下；缺少介词on。