记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连接词组织句子，使表达更流畅。

範例: It's hard to say if someone is good at memorising because life has many things to remember. However, I think I am a bit better than others because I can recall events from a long time ago.

建議: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，内容重复且不连贯。建议用简单句直接表达忘记重要事情的经历，并说明原因，使用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: As I get older, I sometimes forget important things. For example, I forget why I went to buy something or what I should do in class. I think this happens because I feel stressed.

建議: 回答内容较为重复且表达不够准确。建议明确列举需要记住的具体事项，并用连接词使句子更连贯，避免语法错误。

範例: In daily life, I need to remember the time and subjects of my classes. Also, it's important to remember special days like friends' birthdays.

建議: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构不完整且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，清晰说明方法，并用连接词连接句子。

範例: I usually remember important things by writing to-do lists or keeping a diary. This helps me remind myself of tasks that are very important or less urgent, so I can prepare and complete them on time.

× Is hard to say that a people is good at memorizing things because there's a lot of things happens in our life an I think.

✓ It is hard to say that people are good at memorizing things because there are a lot of things happening in our life, I think.

people 是复数名词，不能用 a people；things 是复数，谓语动词也应使用复数形式 happens 应改为 happening 表示正在发生的事情。

× Is hard to say that a people is good at memorizing things because there's a lot of things happens in our life an I think.

✓ It is hard to say that people are good at memorizing things because there are a lot of things happening in our life, I think.

谓语动词 happens 与复数主语 things 不一致，应改为 happening 或者使用复数形式。

× I'm a little better than others at memorizing things because I can remember the things along time ago which others can't.

✓ I'm a little better than others at memorizing things because I can remember things from a long time ago which others can't.

things 前不需要定冠词 the；along time ago 应为 a long time ago。

× Since the aging become older, I have began to forget something which is very important to me.

✓ Since aging has become older, I have begun to forget some things which are very important to me.

时态错误，have began 应为 have begun；aging 是不可数名词，不用加 the；something 应改为 some things；which 后的动词应与先行词复数一致。

× Sometimes I will forget that why I go to buy bedroom and how.

✓ Sometimes I forget why I go to buy things for my bedroom and how.

will 表示将来时，不适合此处；buy bedroom 不合适，应为 buy things for my bedroom。

× And what should I do during the classes? Is always.

✓ And what should I do during the classes? It always happens.

句子缺少主语，Is 应改为 It；always 应放在合适位置。

× I think is because the pressure.

✓ I think it is because of the pressure.

句子缺少主语 it；because 后应加介词 of。

× There's a lot I need to remember in our daily life, for example, what time we have the classes or what classes we are going to have.

✓ There are a lot of things I need to remember in my daily life, for example, what time we have classes or what classes we are going to have.

There is 应改为 There are；a lot 后应加 of；daily life 前的代词应统一为 my。

× I think it's really important to remember that important things in our daily life and sometimes is also I think important to remember some special days to your friendly.

✓ I think it's really important to remember those important things in our daily life and sometimes I also think it's important to remember some special days with your friends.

that 应改为 those 指代复数；句子结构混乱，调整语序；friendly 应改为 friends。

× I often remember the things by writing to do lists or writing in my diary so that I can remind myself which.

✓ I often remember things by writing to-do lists or writing in my diary so that I can remind myself of them.

remind oneself 后应加介词 of；to do lists 应为 to-do lists。

× Those things is very important or those things is not less important for me to do, so I can prepare by myself to finish those work.

✓ Those things are very important or those things are not less important for me to do, so I can prepare myself to finish that work.

主谓不一致，things 是复数，谓语应为 are；work 是不可数名词，前面不加复数形式。