记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且存在语法错误，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达如何记忆。

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually make lists in my notebook to help me remember important tasks. This method helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议用简单句子描述忘记的事情及感受，注意时态和主谓一致。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. Once, I forgot to do my homework, which was important because it affected my group grade. When I realized my mistake, I felt scared because I thought the teacher would be disappointed.

建議: 回答内容较为具体，但存在语法和表达错误。建议注意句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更流畅。

範例: I need to remember important things like my bank card number because forgetting it would make it hard to withdraw money or make payments. Also, I try to keep track of important appointments and deadlines to stay organized.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，句子简洁明了，逻辑连贯。

範例: I usually write important things on my phone to avoid forgetting them. But if something is simple or urgent, I try to remember it in my mind. For example, I quickly memorize a phone number without writing it down.

× Unfortunately are both very good at memorizing things, so therefore I also make list in my little notebook so that I can easily check my notes.

✓ Unfortunately, I am not very good at memorizing things, so therefore I also make lists in my little notebook so that I can easily check my notes.

句子中缺少主语，且“list”应为复数形式“lists”，因为通常会有多条记录。主语缺失导致句子结构不完整。

× I remember what I need to do this method.

✓ I remember what I need to do by using this method.

原句结构混乱，缺少介词短语来表达“通过这种方法”，需要调整句子结构使其通顺。

× How do you stay organized and make sure I don't forget important tasks like doing an important piece of homework or by an important thing?

✓ How do you stay organized and make sure you don't forget important tasks like doing an important piece of homework or buying an important thing?

句中“I”应改为“you”以呼应提问对象，且“by an important thing”应为“buy an important thing”，动词形式错误。

× Well I was so great I was forgot to do my homework which was very important to me because I want to get a group grade.

✓ Well, I was so careless that I forgot to do my homework which was very important to me because I wanted to get a good grade.

“was forgot”错误，正确应为“forgot”；“want”应为过去时“wanted”以保持时态一致。

× While realized my mistake, I felt really scared of her face, her pale because I was afraid the teacher will be disappointed or angry with me.

✓ When I realized my mistake, I felt really scared by the teacher's pale face because I was afraid the teacher would be disappointed or angry with me.

“While realized”缺少主语，应为“When I realized”；“scared of her face, her pale”表达不清，改为“scared by the teacher's pale face”；“will”应改为过去时“would”。

× Well, I think it is very important to remember things like my bank card number because if I forget it I would be able to withdraw money or make payments.

✓ Well, I think it is very important to remember things like my bank card number because if I forget it I would not be able to withdraw money or make payments.

条件句中“would be able to”与前文“if I forget it”逻辑不符，应为“would not be able to”，表示如果忘记就不能取钱或付款。

× Besides that, I also tried to move very important appointment at deadlines to stay organized.

✓ Besides that, I also try to move very important appointments and deadlines to stay organized.

“tried”时态不符，应为现在时“try”；“move”后应接复数名词“appointments”；“at deadlines”介词使用错误，应改为“and deadlines”。

× Well, most of the time I like to note down important things on my phone because I have a list there and you help me avoid forgetting them.

✓ Well, most of the time I like to note down important things on my phone because I have a list there and it helps me avoid forgetting them.

“you help me”指代不明，应改为“it helps me”，指代“list”。

× However, if something is really simple or urgent I thought would memorize it in my mind so I can remember it.

✓ However, if something is really simple or urgent I think I would memorize it in my mind so I can remember it.

“thought”时态错误，应为现在时“think”；缺少主语“I”。

× Italy for example, I will quickly remind myself a phone number or an employment without writing it down.

✓ For example, I will quickly remind myself of a phone number or an appointment without writing it down.

“Italy for example”位置错误，应为“For example”；“remind myself a phone number”缺少介词“of”；“employment”用词错误，应为“appointment”。