记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, watch for grammatical errors and try to be more concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember phone numbers of my close friends and family members. This shows that I have a sharp memory which helps me retain important information effectively.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your ideas clearly and use linking words to explain reasons. Also, avoid vague phrases and be specific about the situations.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things several times. For instance, when I am stressed or upset, I tend to forget tasks easily. Recently, I missed my passport appointment because I was overwhelmed with stress.

建議: Your answer is quite confusing and lacks clarity. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent and easy to understand.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks and appointments. For example, I have to recall where I need to go, such as the market or a friend's house. Keeping track of these helps me manage my day effectively.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid redundancy and be concise.

範例: I usually remember important things by writing them down in my phone's note app. This way, I can easily check my plans and avoid forgetting any important tasks.

× Definitely I can say that I am good at memorizing things because I remember a lot of phone numbers like I remember my closest friend phone number, my aunt, my cousin.

✓ Definitely I can say that I am good at memorizing things because I remember a lot of phone numbers like I remember my closest friends' phone numbers, my aunt's, my cousin's.

The phrase 'closest friend phone number' is singular but refers to multiple people, so it should be plural possessive 'closest friends' phone numbers'. Similarly, possessive forms for 'aunt' and 'cousin' need apostrophes to indicate possession.

× So I can say that I am good at memorizing thing and I can say that I have a good sharp memory that I can easily memorize the things into my mind and not for.

✓ So I can say that I am good at memorizing things and I can say that I have a good sharp memory that I can easily memorize things into my mind and not forget.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. Also, 'not for' seems to be a typo or incomplete; it should be 'not forget' to make sense.

× Oh yes, many times I forgot some of my important things like when I have for us to Dan gets irritated.

✓ Oh yes, many times I have forgotten some of my important things like when I am stressed or irritated.

The past tense of 'forget' is 'forgot', but in this context, present perfect 'have forgotten' is more appropriate. The phrase 'have for us to Dan gets irritated' is unclear and seems incorrect; it is corrected to 'am stressed or irritated' to convey the intended meaning.

× At that time I easily forgot all the things and recently I forgot my most important passport appointment due to the stress I indulge in my mind.

✓ At that time I easily forgot all the things and recently I forgot my most important passport appointment due to the stress I was under.

The phrase 'stress I indulge in my mind' is incorrect; it should be 'stress I was under' to correctly express the cause of forgetting. The past tense 'forgot' is correctly used here.

× So yes, I can see that I can forgot.

✓ So yes, I can see that I can forget.

'Forgot' is the past tense form and cannot be used after 'can' which requires the base form 'forget'.

× Then in my day-to-day life, I need to remember some of my important task that award the important thing I have to done in the Dave and where should I have to go?

✓ Then in my day-to-day life, I need to remember some of my important tasks that are important things I have to do in the day and where I should go.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'some of my'. 'Award' is incorrect here; it should be 'are'. 'Have to done' is incorrect; it should be 'have to do'. 'Dave' is a typo for 'day'.

× Like if I had to go to a market or someone house.

✓ Like if I have to go to a market or someone's house.

The sentence is incomplete and uses past tense 'had' incorrectly; it should be present tense 'have'. Also, 'someone house' needs possessive form 'someone's house'.

× I think these kinds of things I need to remember in my daily life and that's tall and one more over.

✓ I think these kinds of things I need to remember in my daily life and that's all, and one more thing.

'That's tall and one more over' is unclear and seems to be a mispronunciation or typo; corrected to 'that's all, and one more thing' for clarity.

× Well, as I had mentioned that I am good at memorizing things.

✓ Well, as I have mentioned, I am good at memorizing things.

The past perfect 'had mentioned' is incorrect here; present perfect 'have mentioned' is appropriate to refer to a recent statement.

× So definitely I do not miss any kind of important things over if we're The thing is in DC plans.

✓ So definitely I do not miss any kind of important things. If there is something, it is in my plans.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It is corrected to two clear sentences conveying the intended meaning.

× So I ignored that thing into my phone like I have a app note app in which I can write all the things which are very important.

✓ So I note that thing in my phone; I have a note app in which I can write all the things which are very important.

'Ignored that thing into my phone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'note that thing in my phone'. Also, 'a app' should be 'a note app'.