记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat natural but a bit repetitive and unclear. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with clear reasons or examples. Avoid filler phrases like "I mean" and repeated words like "I, I."

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember important dates and appointments because I make a conscious effort to focus on them.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and provide specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid unnecessary phrases like "that's a great question to ask."

範例: Yes, I once forgot an important work meeting last year. It was a meeting with the CEO, and I missed it because I didn't check my schedule carefully.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples using linking words to improve coherence.

範例: In my daily life, I mainly need to remember household chores. For instance, I have to prepare meals, do the laundry, and clean the house regularly.

建議: Your answer is clear but contains some repetition and minor errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: When I have important events like exams or meetings, I usually record them on my calendar, either a physical one or on my phone. Then, I tick them off once I complete the task.

× I think I am actually.

✓ I think I am, actually.

A comma is needed before 'actually' to separate the adverb from the rest of the sentence for clarity and correct punctuation.

× Some days we're like all just so, you know, harsh on ourselves.

✓ Some days we're all just so, you know, harsh on ourselves.

The phrase 'like all just so' is incorrect. The word 'like' is unnecessary here and should be removed to correctly express the idea that 'we're all just harsh on ourselves'.

× I, I do remember the things.

✓ I do remember things.

The phrase 'the things' is awkward and unnecessary here. Using 'things' without 'the' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× I have forgotten. An important meeting that was a work meeting actually lost.

✓ I have forgotten an important meeting, which was a work meeting, actually.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the sentences and adding commas improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That was last year, yeah, as, as far as I can remember those the last year it wasn't really an important meeting with their CEO.

✓ That was last year, yeah. As far as I can remember, it wasn't really an important meeting with their CEO.

The original sentence is run-on and confusing. Breaking it into two sentences and correcting the phrase 'those the last year' to 'last year' improves clarity and tense consistency.

× In my daily life, it's just the household chores.

✓ In my daily life, it's just household chores.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'household chores' when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× Because I'm not doing anything particular like working or something.

✓ Because I'm not doing anything particular, like working or something else.

Adding a comma after 'particular' improves readability, and 'something else' is more natural than just 'something' in this context.

× So yeah, it's a very easy to remember, like every task that I need to complete during the day, like making food, doing laundry, doing cleaning and all that.

✓ So yeah, it's very easy to remember every task that I need to complete during the day, like making food, doing laundry, cleaning, and all that.

The phrase 'a very easy to remember' is incorrect; 'very easy to remember' is correct. Also, 'doing cleaning' should be 'cleaning' for natural expression.

× When something is really important. Like any exams, any meetings or any any like imported dates, I usually track them on my calendar that could be a physical or my mobile phone calendar and once the task is complete I marked I ticked at that mark off the list.

✓ When something is really important, like any exams, meetings, or important dates, I usually track them on my calendar, which could be physical or on my mobile phone. Once the task is complete, I mark it off the list.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repetition ('any any'), incorrect word choice ('imported' instead of 'important'), and awkward phrasing. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.