记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够连贯，句子结构较为简单且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，避免断句，增加连接词使表达更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember phone numbers, ID numbers, and even my friends' birthdays.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子不连贯。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和语法，使用连接词使叙述更流畅。

範例: Yes, once I had an important exam but forgot to bring my ID card. I had to rush back home to get it. Since then, I always make sure to keep my ID card with me.

建議: 回答内容表达混乱，句子不完整且缺乏逻辑。建议理清思路，使用完整句子，明确表达需要记住的具体事项，并使用连接词。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedule and to call my mom every day. To help me, I write reminders on my phone.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达使用手机应用和提醒功能来帮助记忆。

範例: I usually write important things down on my phone using calendar or planning apps. These apps send me notifications to remind me so I don't forget.

× Yeah, I think I'm pretty good at memorizing things. For example, memorizing numbers like. Phone numbers, ID numbers, even my friends birthday date. I'm pretty good at.

✓ Yeah, I think I'm pretty good at memorizing things. For example, memorizing numbers like phone numbers, ID numbers, even my friend's birthday date. I'm pretty good at it.

原句中“like.”后面断句不完整，且“friends birthday date”缺少所有格标记，应为“friend's birthday date”。最后一句缺少宾语，应补充“it”。建议连贯表达，避免断句错误。

× Yes, once I had on. Important exam and I forgot to take my. ID card So I'm heading in rush, go back my home and take it.

✓ Yes, once I had an important exam and I forgot to take my ID card. So I was in a rush, went back home and took it.

原句中“had on. Important exam”应为“had an important exam”，冠词错误；“I'm heading in rush”时态和表达错误，应为过去时“was in a rush”；“go back my home”缺少介词，应为“went back home”。需要使用正确的过去时态和介词。

× So after that I will always keep my man and not forget to take my ID card.

✓ So after that, I will always keep my mind and not forget to take my ID card.

原句中“keep my man”应为“keep my mind”，拼写错误。表达未来习惯动作时，使用“will always”正确。

× I need to remember search of things.

✓ I need to remember a search for things.

“search of things”搭配错误，正确搭配是“search for things”，表示“寻找某物”。

× For instance, I need to know. What? Classes. I have one Netstart and I need to. Call my phone to my mom every day.

✓ For instance, I need to know what classes I have on Netstart, and I need to call my mom every day.

原句断句不完整且混乱，“Call my phone to my mom”表达错误，应为“call my mom”。句子应连贯表达完整意思。

× So I will write it down on my phone reminders.

✓ So I will write it down in my phone reminders.

“write down on my phone reminders”中介词用错，正确应为“write down in my phone reminders”，表示在提醒事项中写下。

× I will write it down on my cell phone using calendar or planning apps. So it keeps my mind to remember it.

✓ I will write it down on my cell phone using calendar or planning apps, so it helps me remember it.

“So it keeps my mind to remember it”表达不自然，应改为“so it helps me remember it”，使句子通顺且符合英语表达习惯。

× I will also. Do or notification too? Notice me?

✓ I will also set notifications to remind me.

原句断句且表达混乱，“Do or notification too? Notice me?”不符合语法，应改为完整句子“set notifications to remind me”，表达清晰。