记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more coherent and grammatically correct. Try to form complete sentences and avoid fragmented phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and be specific about your experiences with memorising.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially faces and important events. However, I sometimes struggle to remember where I place small items like my keys, which can be frustrating. For example, I often find them in the drawer on the table when I forget where I put them.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, add linking words to improve flow and provide more specific details about the situation.

範例: Yes, I once forgot something very important. When I was about to leave for an examination, I suddenly remembered that I had left my documents in the drawer. Although I tried to recall where exactly, I couldn't find them at first, which made me nervous as I frantically searched for them.

建議: Your answer is somewhat relevant but incomplete and lacks clarity. Avoid incomplete sentences and provide full explanations. Use linking words to connect your points and be more specific about what else you need to remember.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember several important things. For example, I must attend meetings on time to communicate effectively with clients. Additionally, I have to remember my exercise and gym schedule to stay healthy. Besides these, I also keep track of appointments and deadlines.

建議: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Try to form complete sentences and explain your methods clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid confusing phrases. Also, correct any misused words to improve clarity.

範例: I use several methods to remember important things. One way is by recalling what I have planned and then acting on it. Another method I prefer is jotting down notes and checking them off later, which helps me stay organised and ensures I don't forget anything important.

× However despair of my good memories.

✓ However, despite my good memories,

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. 'Despair of my good memories' is not a correct phrase. The correct phrase is 'despite my good memories' to express contrast. Adding a comma after 'However' improves readability.

× Sometimes it's keeps my mind where I have placed the keys.

✓ Sometimes it keeps my mind on where I have placed the keys.

The phrase 'it's keeps' is incorrect; 'it keeps' is correct. Also, the verb 'keeps' should be followed by a preposition 'on' to indicate focus or attention. The sentence structure is corrected to make sense.

× Sometimes there in the drawer on the table.

✓ Sometimes they are in the drawer on the table.

The pronoun 'there' is incorrectly used instead of 'they are' to refer to the keys. 'There' indicates a place, but here the subject is 'keys' which is plural, so 'they are' is appropriate.

× Despite of Maya.

✓ Despite Maya.

The phrase 'despite of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'despite' without 'of'. Also, 'Maya' seems out of context and may be a mishearing or error; if it refers to a person or concept, it should be clarified.

× Yes, I have forwarded something crucial who once I was about to leave for examination and suddenly I remembered that I have forgotten my documents which I left in the draw.

✓ Yes, I once forgot something crucial when I was about to leave for the examination, and suddenly I remembered that I had left my documents in the drawer.

The verb 'have forwarded' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'forgot'. The sentence requires past tense consistency: 'was about to leave' and 'had left' for past perfect to indicate the documents were left before the remembering. 'Draw' is corrected to 'drawer'.

× However, despite of recalling, I couldn't find it in the drawer.

✓ However, despite recalling, I couldn't find it in the drawer.

The phrase 'despite of' is incorrect; 'despite' should be used without 'of'. The sentence is corrected accordingly.

× I was nervous and frantically searching for them.

✓ I was nervous and frantically searching for it.

The pronoun 'them' is plural, but the antecedent 'document' is singular. Therefore, 'it' should be used to match the singular noun.

× There are various important things in my life which I need to remember.

✓ There are various important things in my life that I need to remember.

The sentence is grammatically correct but 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in restrictive clauses for clarity in English (India). This is a stylistic improvement.

× Furthermore, I need to remember my exercising time, gym time in order to be fit, fine and healthy.

✓ Furthermore, I need to remember my exercise time and gym time in order to be fit, fine, and healthy.

The noun 'exercising time' is incorrect; 'exercise time' is the correct noun phrase. Also, adding 'and' between 'exercise time' and 'gym time' improves sentence flow. Commas are added for clarity.

× Additionally, there are appointed.

✓ Additionally, there are appointments.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'There are appointed' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'appointments' to indicate scheduled events.

× There are multiple ways of remembering things, one of which is. Recalling.

✓ There are multiple ways of remembering things, one of which is recalling.

The sentence is broken incorrectly by a period after 'is'. It should be a continuous sentence without a period to maintain grammatical correctness.

× Whatever I have thought of before and then doing it.

✓ I recall whatever I have thought of before and then do it.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a main verb and subject. The correction adds subject and verb to form a complete sentence.

× And the other one is which is one of my favorite.

✓ And the other one, which is one of my favorites,

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. It should be restructured to include commas and be part of a larger sentence.

× That is the jotting down the points and then later on.

✓ That is jotting down the points and then, later on,

The article 'the' before 'jotting' is unnecessary. The sentence is incomplete and should be connected to the next part.

× Checking out the boxes.

✓ checking off the boxes.

The phrase 'checking out the boxes' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'checking off the boxes' meaning to mark completed tasks.

× It helps me stay Oregon.

✓ It helps me stay organized.

The word 'Oregon' is a mispronunciation or typo. The intended word is 'organized' meaning to keep things in order.