记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contradictory. Try to give a clear and direct response to the question, followed by a brief explanation. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially mathematical solutions, although I sometimes struggle with other types of information.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and could be more concise. Use the past tense correctly and avoid repeating similar ideas unnecessarily.

範例: Yes, I often forget things. For example, last night I forgot to book my dentist appointment.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Make sure to use correct verb forms and clarify your ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: One of the most important things I need to remember daily is to stay organized. This helps me both in my studies and personal life.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains several grammatical errors. Try to clearly explain your methods for remembering important things using simple and correct sentences. Avoid unclear phrases.

範例: I usually remember important things by writing them down or repeating them in my mind. This method helps me improve my memory over time.

× I am not that good in memorizing things.

✓ I am not that good at memorizing things.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. The phrase 'good at' is used to indicate skill or ability in something.

× I always forgot something and last night I forgot that I have to book my appointment for the dentist.

✓ I always forget something and last night I forgot that I had to book my appointment for the dentist.

The phrase 'I always forgot' should be in the present tense 'I always forget' to indicate a habitual action. Also, 'I have to' should be in the past tense 'I had to' to match the past event 'last night'.

× One of the most important thing is to staying organized.

✓ One of the most important things is to stay organized.

The phrase 'one of the most important thing' should use the plural 'things' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. Also, 'to staying' should be corrected to the infinitive form 'to stay'.

× This helps me a lot and it has me both in my own line in our learning environment as well as in my personal life.

✓ This helps me a lot and it has helped me both in my own role in our learning environment as well as in my personal life.

The phrase 'it has me' is incorrect; it should be 'it has helped me' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'in my own line' is unclear and should be 'in my own role' or similar. The preposition 'in' is correct here.

× I always try to memorize things very effectively by writing it or buy a memorizing it in my brain.

✓ I always try to memorize things very effectively by writing them down or by memorizing them in my brain.

The phrase 'writing it' should be 'writing them down' because 'things' is plural. 'Buy a memorizing it' is incorrect; it should be 'by memorizing them'. The preposition 'by' is used to indicate the method.

× Sometimes I had to remember the things away from the past but it usually helps me alot day by day.

✓ Sometimes I have to remember things from the past but it usually helps me a lot day by day.

The phrase 'I had to' should be 'I have to' to indicate a habitual action. 'Remember the things away from the past' is incorrect; it should be 'remember things from the past'. Also, 'alot' should be two words: 'a lot'.