记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 많으며, 문장이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 정확하게 구성하고, 문법적 오류를 줄이기 위해 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget information quickly, especially when I have to take exams.

建議: 답변이 중복되고 문장이 연결되지 않아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 문장을 논리적으로 연결하고 중복을 피하며, 구체적인 예시를 들어 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Yes, I often forget my passwords because I have many accounts. This means I have to reset them frequently, which is quite frustrating.

建議: 답변이 다소 단편적이고 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 세부사항을 포함하여 완전한 문장으로 답변하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: In my daily life, the most important thing I need to remember is my appointments. I have to recall the exact time and place where I agreed to meet someone.

建議: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 문장이 불완전합니다. 문장을 완성하고, 연결어를 사용하여 논리적으로 답변을 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: At first, I tried writing things down in my diary, but it wasn't very helpful. Now, I use the memo app on my smartphone, which helps me remember important things better.

× I usually forgotten anything and I have difficulties in when I have to take an exam.

✓ I usually forget anything and I have difficulties when I have to take an exam.

The verb 'forgotten' is the past participle and should not be used with 'usually' which indicates a habitual action. The correct simple present tense 'forget' should be used to express habitual actions.

× I have difficulties in when I have to take an exam.

✓ I have difficulties when I have to take an exam.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary before 'when'. The phrase 'have difficulties when' is correct without 'in'.

× I can't remember some much information in quick time.

✓ I can't remember so much information in a short time.

'Some much' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'so much'. Also, 'quick time' is not idiomatic; 'a short time' is the correct expression.

× Yes, sure. I really.

✓ Yes, sure. I really do.

The sentence 'I really.' is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'do' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× I have too much accounts so I can't remember.

✓ I have too many accounts so I can't remember.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'accounts' is countable, so 'many' should be used.

× I can't remember all of them so I forgot it a lot.

✓ I can't remember all of them so I forget it a lot.

The sentence mixes present tense 'can't remember' with past tense 'forgot'. To maintain consistency, 'forget' in present tense should be used.

× I think the most important things in my daily life to remember is my appointment with someone.

✓ I think the most important thing to remember in my daily life is my appointment with someone.

'Things' is plural but the verb 'is' is singular; also, 'the most important thing' is singular, so it should be consistent. The phrase order is adjusted for clarity.

× I need to. Remember the exact time and place where we promised to meet?

✓ I need to remember the exact time and place where we promised to meet.

The sentence is fragmented and ends with a question mark incorrectly. It should be a complete statement without a question mark.

× Add once.

✓ At once.

'Add once' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'At once', meaning immediately.

× I try to route right down on my diary, but I think it's quite not helpful for me a lot.

✓ I try to write right down in my diary, but I think it's not very helpful for me.

'Route' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'write'. The preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to a diary. The phrase 'quite not helpful for me a lot' is awkward and corrected to 'not very helpful for me'.

× Then I try to use my smartphone memo application and I think I'm now better in.

✓ Then I try to use my smartphone memo application and I think I'm better now.

The phrase 'I'm now better in' is incomplete and ungrammatical. It should be 'I'm better now' to express improvement.