记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors that affect naturalness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because my background in social science requires me to remember a lot of historical facts and concepts. For example, I often memorise dates and events, which helps me in my studies.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details, linking ideas logically. Avoid filler words and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For instance, as an administration officer, I once forgot to book a flight ticket for a colleague, which caused him to miss the trip. I had to take responsibility and cover the cost myself.

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a direct response with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific details using linking words. Keep your sentences concise and avoid repetition.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my to-do list as an administration officer. I prioritise tasks by importance to ensure I complete urgent work first and manage my time effectively.

建議: Your answer has good content but is difficult to understand due to grammar and vocabulary errors. Use clear sentences with correct grammar and linking words to explain your methods specifically and logically.

範例: I usually use a to-do list and a calendar to remember important things. I write down all my tasks for the month and assign them to specific days, prioritising them so I can manage my time and stay organised.

× Yes, I'm very glad to memory or kind of things which I wanted to do.

✓ Yes, I'm very glad to memorise things that I want to do.

The verb 'memory' is incorrectly used as a noun here; the correct verb form is 'memorise'. Also, 'wanted' should be 'want' to match the present tense context.

× I think it's because it's related to my background education.

✓ I think it's because it is related to my educational background.

The phrase 'background education' is awkward; 'educational background' is the correct collocation. Also, 'it's' is better expanded to 'it is' for clarity.

× Because I stand in the social science and it requires me.

✓ Because I study social science and it requires me to memorise a lot.

The phrase 'I stand in the social science' is incorrect; 'I study social science' is appropriate. The sentence is incomplete and needs to specify what is required.

× You memorize a lot of things related to history or juju.

✓ You memorise a lot of things related to history or culture.

'Juju' is unclear or incorrect in this context; 'culture' is a better fit. Also, 'memorize' should be 'memorise' in British English.

× Yes, uh, I'm admin administration officer in my company and this our time I forgotten to book the flight ticket for one of my colleagues and he actually missed the trip and I also paid the price for the myth.

✓ Yes, I am an administration officer in my company and this time I forgot to book the flight ticket for one of my colleagues, and he actually missed the trip. I also paid the price for that.

'I'm admin administration officer' should be 'I am an administration officer'. 'Forgotten' is the past participle and should be 'forgot' in simple past tense here. 'Myth' is incorrect; likely meant 'that'. The sentence is long and needs to be split for clarity.

× Oh, I saw administration officer are usually have to make sure my.

✓ Oh, as an administration officer, I usually have to make sure of my tasks.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Saw' is incorrect; 'as an' is appropriate. 'Are usually have' is incorrect; 'usually have' is correct.

× Today list the list that I need to finish in a daily and makes a priority.

✓ I make a daily to-do list of tasks I need to finish and prioritise them.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Today list the list' is incorrect; 'I make a daily to-do list' is correct. 'Makes a priority' should be 'prioritise them'.

× Which thing is important and which is less important?

✓ Which things are important and which are less important?

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context of comparing multiple items.

× It's the priority for over ties thing.

✓ It's the priority for all these things.

The phrase 'over ties thing' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'all these things'.

× Usually I use A to do list and also pretended the calendar at them month and the other Dharma all my all the things I need to do this month on the day of the week and make some prioritize so that I can manage time and all also stay organized.

✓ Usually I use a to-do list and also print the calendar for the month and organise all the things I need to do this month by day of the week and prioritise them so that I can manage my time and stay organised.

'Pretended' is incorrect; should be 'print'. 'At them month' is incorrect; should be 'for the month'. 'Dharma' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error. 'Make some prioritize' should be 'prioritise them'. The sentence is long and needs restructuring for clarity.