记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và mạch lạc trong tiếng Anh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh các câu ngắt quãng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Hãy cố gắng nối các ý lại với nhau để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I believe having a good memory is very important in daily life.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten some important tasks, like the work my mother asked me to do, but I usually try my best to remember important things.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và thiếu mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích cụ thể những điều bạn cần nhớ trong cuộc sống hàng ngày.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things related to my family and friends, such as their birthdays and special events.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn bị ngắt quãng và thiếu sự liên kết giữa các ý. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý bằng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I have a habit of writing down important events in a diary every day, which helps me remember them better.

× Yes, I am good at.

✓ Yes, I am good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'good at' requires an object to complete the meaning. The original sentence ends abruptly without specifying what the speaker is good at. Adding 'memorizing things' completes the phrase correctly.

× Memories is very important for me.

✓ Memory is very important for me.

'Memories' is plural, but the verb 'is' is singular, causing a subject-verb agreement error. Also, 'memory' as a singular noun is more appropriate here to refer to the ability to remember. Therefore, 'Memory is very important for me.' is correct.

× Actually, I have forgotten something important.

✓ Actually, I have forgotten something important.

This sentence is correct in tense and structure; no correction needed.

× Such arrays.

✓ Such as errors.

The phrase 'Such arrays' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misspelling. The intended phrase might be 'Such as errors' or 'Such as mistakes.' The sentence fragment is incomplete and needs clarification.

× Their work which my mother give me.

✓ The work which my mother gave me.

'Their' is a possessive pronoun referring to multiple people, which is incorrect here. 'The work' is the correct phrase. Also, 'give' should be in past tense 'gave' to match the past context.

× But I never forgotten.

✓ But I have never forgotten.

The verb 'forgotten' is a past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. 'Never' should be placed between 'have' and 'forgotten'.

× Some important memorized.

✓ Some important things memorized.

The phrase is incomplete and lacks a subject. Adding 'things' clarifies the meaning.

× For me I need to remember.

✓ For me, I need to remember.

A comma after 'For me' improves sentence clarity.

× The memorized.

✓ The memories.

'Memorized' is a verb or adjective form, but here a noun is needed. 'Memories' is the correct noun form.

× Which is.

✓ Which are.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to a plural noun, so the verb should be plural 'are'.

× Belonging.

✓ Belonging to.

The verb 'belong' requires the preposition 'to' to indicate possession or association.

× With my family and my friends.

✓ To my family and my friends.

When talking about things that belong or relate to someone, 'to' is more appropriate than 'with'.

× I have a habit.

✓ I have a habit.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× It is writing.

✓ It is writing down.

The verb 'writing' often requires a particle like 'down' to indicate the action of recording something.

× Important event.

✓ Important events.

Plural form 'events' is more appropriate when referring to multiple occurrences.

× In every day.

✓ Every day.

'Every day' is an adverbial phrase meaning 'each day' and does not require the preposition 'in'.

× In a.

✓ In a diary.

The phrase is incomplete; adding 'diary' completes the meaning.

× Diary.

✓ Diary.

This word alone is fine if connected properly; no correction needed here.

× After day.

✓ After the day.

The phrase requires the definite article 'the' to specify the day.