记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，直接回答问题并补充具体细节。

範例: Yes, I was good at memorising things when I was young. For example, I could remember my family members' phone numbers and their birthdays without writing them down.

建議: 回答内容不明确且语法错误较多，建议直接回答问题并举例说明，使用连词使表达更连贯。

範例: Actually, I have forgotten some important things before, like missing a deadline for a project. However, I try to be more careful now to avoid such mistakes.

建議: 回答不连贯且含糊，建议明确列举日常需要记住的具体事项，并用连词连接句子。

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember important dates such as homework deadlines and exam schedules to stay organized.

建議: 表达不流畅且有语法错误，建议简洁明了地说明记忆方法，并使用连接词使句子更自然。

範例: I used to rely on my memory, but now I use my phone to set reminders for important tasks, which helps me remember them easily.

× I guess that I was good at memorizing sincere when I was young, that I can remember all the numbers of my family, is my relatives and just above my friends phone number, their date of birth and other things.

✓ I guess that I was good at memorizing since I was young, that I can remember all the numbers of my family, my relatives, and just about my friends' phone numbers, their dates of birth and other things.

句中'sincere'应为'since'，且'numbers'应与复数名词匹配，'relatives'前不应有'is'，'friends phone number'应为'friends' phone numbers'，表示复数所有格。

× I was so lucky that I just forgets is useless things and honest three phase.

✓ I was so lucky that I just forget useless things and honest three phase.

动词'forgets'错误地使用了第三人称单数形式，主语是第一人称单数，应使用'forget'。

× In fact, I did not need to remember something up. Besides the dative. Is the submission type of my homework or some very significant sensor like the data from some exams just like?

✓ In fact, I do not need to remember much. Besides the date, it is the submission time of my homework or some very significant things like the dates from some exams.

'remember something up'用法错误，应为'remember much'；'dative'应为'date'；'submission type'应为'submission time'；'sensor'用词不当，应为'things'或'dates'。

× OK, I used to remember things suggest with my brain but nowadays with the usage of phones that I will set up a reminder in my phone and let him all that it took to Remember Me something.

✓ OK, I used to remember things by using my brain but nowadays with the usage of phones, I set up a reminder in my phone and let it remind me of something.

'suggest with my brain'用法错误，应为'by using my brain'；'let him all that it took to Remember Me something'表达混乱，应为'let it remind me of something'。