记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用完整句子表达原因。

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially English vocabulary, because I find it hard to remember the meanings of new words.

建議: 回答内容简单且语法错误明显，建议使用完整句子并补充细节使回答更具体。

範例: Yes, once when I was taking a taxi with my friends, I accidentally left my phone in the taxi and couldn't get it back.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议直接回答并具体说明需要记住的内容。

範例: As a college student, I usually need to remember my daily schedule and the homework I have to complete for my next class.

建議: 回答不连贯且含糊，语法错误严重。建议清晰描述记忆方法，使用连贯句子。

範例: To remember important things, I first write them down in my notebook, and then I save reminders on my computer or phone.

× Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things, For example, well, I'm study English.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things. For example, well, I study English.

这里的错误是动词时态错误，'I'm study' 应该改为 'I study'，因为主语是第一人称单数，动词用一般现在时。

× It is difficult for me because I can't. Oh, memories are. Meaning of the words.

✓ It is difficult for me because I can't remember the meanings of the words.

原句结构混乱，缺少完整的谓语和宾语，应该合并成一句完整的句子，表达清楚“我不能记住单词的意思”。

× Yes, the when I'm taking a taxi with my friends, I lost my phone on the taxi.

✓ Yes, when I was taking a taxi with my friends, I lost my phone in the taxi.

句子结构错误，'the when'多余且不正确，时态应为过去进行时 'was taking'，介词应为'in'而非'on'。

× Because I am a college student so in my daily life or I usually remember my schedule and the wax should I have in the next class.

✓ Because I am a college student, in my daily life I usually remember my schedule and the work I should do in the next class.

句子结构混乱，'or'不合适，'wax'应为'work'，并且句子需要调整使其通顺。

× I over remember important things into his. First I will write it on my notebook and the second I will. Oh. Make a magazine and all on the. Computer.

✓ I often remember important things in this way. First, I will write them in my notebook, and second, I will make a reminder on the computer.

句子结构混乱，'over remember'不正确，应为'often remember'，'into his'无意义，'make a magazine'应为'make a reminder'，并且句子需要连贯表达。