记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，避免重复表达，并且用更自然的表达方式描述自己的记忆能力。

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially complex mathematical formulas, because they are difficult for me to remember.

建議: 回答中句子不连贯，语法错误较多。建议使用连贯的句子表达，明确说明忘记的重要事情及其后果。

範例: Yes, I once forgot to submit an assignment on time, which affected my score negatively.

建議: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子表达需要记住的内容，并说明原因。

範例: I need to remember the weather forecast so that I can plan my daily activities accordingly and avoid any inconvenience.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议使用完整句子，清晰描述记忆重要事情的方法，并举例说明。

範例: I usually carry a small notebook with me and write down important things whenever I remember them. This helps me to remember tasks, like reminding me about an upcoming test.

× I think it is. A difficult stuff for me to memorize those complex formulations.

✓ I think it is difficult stuff for me to memorize those complex formulations.

“stuff”是不可数名词，前面不应该加不定冠词“a”。

× I think it is. A difficult stuff for me to memorize those complex formulations.

✓ I think it is difficult for me to memorize those complex formulations.

句子结构不完整，“I think it is.”后面缺少内容，应合并为完整句子。

× I remember there's a day I missed my deadline of submitting my assignment.

✓ I remember there was a day I missed my deadline for submitting my assignment.

过去时态中，“there is”应改为“there was”，且“deadline of”应改为“deadline for”。

× And my score does. Be affected by this behavior.

✓ And my score was affected by this behavior.

句子断裂且时态错误，应合并并使用过去时态。

× I need to remember the weather condition. Does I can manage my daily schedule? And won't be influenced by the weather.

✓ I need to remember the weather condition so I can manage my daily schedule and won't be influenced by the weather.

“Does I can”结构错误，应改为“so I can”，并合并句子使其通顺。

× I usually carry out other small notebook with me and whenever I remember something important I will write it down It can.

✓ I usually carry a small notebook with me, and whenever I remember something important, I write it down. It can

“carry out other small notebook”错误，应为“carry a small notebook”，且句子缺少逗号和连接词。

× Batter helps me to remember something important.

✓ It better helps me to remember something important.

“Batter”拼写错误，应为“better”，表示“更好地”。

× For example, it will remind me that you have a test today and.

✓ For example, it will remind me that I have a test today.

句子不完整，且人称错误，应改为第一人称。