记忆— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
No, absolutely not. And I I had a very bad memory. Since I was a child. In ways. Ages I found my. Memory is getting better, getting worse and worse. Yeah, that's very sad, but that's a fact.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
Even though I have a bad memory, I never forgot anything important because I know that I I have a bad memory. So every time when I when I have to remember something important I would brought it down and put it in agility systems put in reminder in to keep me reminded.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
Well, since I'm a software developer, I need to remember the context of my program. By context I mean the files and the connection between them and the relationship between these files. These programs an along with some information like documents and people and business requirement.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
Well. First I will identify that UM if The thing is important or not. One thing is labeled as important, I re put it in. A task management system and to make sure that I be reminded.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的时态和表达方式。
範例: No, I'm not good at memorising things. I've had a poor memory since I was a child, and unfortunately, it seems to be getting worse over time.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态，避免重复，并且更自然地表达如何记忆重要事情。
範例: Although I have a bad memory, I never forget important things because I write them down or set reminders in an app to help me remember.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答内容较具体，但表达有些混乱，语法和词汇使用不够准确。建议理清句子结构，使用更准确的词汇表达。
範例: As a software developer, I need to remember the structure of my programs, including the files, their connections, and related documents, as well as business requirements and team members involved.
How do you remember important things?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答不够流畅，存在语法错误和重复。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达步骤，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
範例: First, I decide if something is important. If it is, I add it to my task management system to ensure I receive reminders.
文法
× In ways. Ages I found my. Memory is getting better, getting worse and worse.
✓ In ways, ages ago, I found my memory was getting worse and worse.
这里的 'ways' 和 'ages' 用法不当，应该用复数形式 'ways' 但句子结构不完整，且 'ages' 应该用作时间状语，表达“很久以前”。此外，'memory' 是不可数名词，前面不需要冠词。建议调整句子结构，使其更通顺。
× Even though I have a bad memory, I never forgot anything important because I know that I I have a bad memory.
✓ Even though I have a bad memory, I have never forgotten anything important because I know that I have a bad memory.
这里 'never forgot' 应该用现在完成时 'have never forgotten'，因为谈论的是从过去到现在的经历。时态不一致导致表达不准确。
× So every time when I when I have to remember something important I would brought it down and put it in agility systems put in reminder in to keep me reminded.
✓ So every time when I have to remember something important, I write it down and put it in agility systems, put in a reminder to keep me reminded.
'would brought' 是错误的过去式用法，正确应该是 'write'（现在时）或 'wrote'（过去时），根据上下文这里应使用一般现在时描述习惯动作。
× These programs an along with some information like documents and people and business requirement.
✓ These programs, along with some information like documents, people, and business requirements.
'business requirement' 应为复数 'business requirements'，因为通常指多个需求。
× One thing is labeled as important, I re put it in. A task management system and to make sure that I be reminded.
✓ Once a thing is labeled as important, I put it in a task management system to make sure that I am reminded.
'I re put' 是错误表达，应为 'I put'；'to make sure that I be reminded' 中 'be' 应改为 'am'，符合主语人称和时态。
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